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Post by berrykit101 on Aug 14, 2010 13:17:12 GMT -6
Silverpaw walked in the apprentice's den.She sat down lookiing at the sky.She saw a rain drop.She ran out and played in the rain."I wish Firepaw was here."Silverpaw looked around and saw a flame//A flame?//Silverpaw walked closer and the flame made a fire ring around her.She gasped.Fire was everywhere.She couldn't find a way out."Firepaw!!!!"Silverpaw yelled her fur burnt from the flames.
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Post by Firetail on Aug 14, 2010 13:26:20 GMT -6
i felt the flames before i saw them. i jumped up, hearing my name. "fire!" i yelled, hoping some warriors would come. //i wish it would rain!// i thought. i found my friend i looked for the best way to get through. i found a weak spot and jumped over it, just barely making it over and burning some of my fur. "Silverpaw!" i said. "hold your breath, try to not breathe the smoke!" i said. "we jump there!" i said, pointing to where i had jumped. "hurry!" i said. the flames were growing bigger each second, and soon we wouldnt be able to jump.
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Post by berrykit101 on Aug 14, 2010 13:30:45 GMT -6
Silverpaw was scared."No I can't Firepaw!"Silverpaw kicked the dust.She held her breath//I'm stupid but it's worth it.//Silverpaw thought.She almost lost her breath but kept kicking."Go get water!"Silverpaw mewed.
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Firetail
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Post by Firetail on Aug 14, 2010 13:34:47 GMT -6
"no!" i yelled. i pushed her towards the fire. "we have to jump! now! or else we wont make it out!" i yelled, the flames growing.
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Post by berrykit101 on Aug 14, 2010 13:37:58 GMT -6
"I have to do this!"Silverpaw ignored it.She rolled backwards.She rolled into the flames.Oww!!!"Silverpaw was on fire.She rolled around.She jumped over the flames and got water.She jumped back over and poured it on the flames."Look that tree!"Silverpaw mewed looking at the tree."Let's jump on that."Silverpaw mewed.She knew what she had to do."Go and leave!"SIlverpaw yelled.Her eyes blurred.She could barely see anything.She fell to the ground.
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Firetail
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Post by Firetail on Aug 14, 2010 13:45:20 GMT -6
"no!" i yelled, my coal black eyes reflecting the flames, anger burning. i grabbed her by the scruff and jumped over. i lost my grip and she fell, safe and out of the way of the fire. i hadnt jumped high enough. "ahh!" i wailed as the flames touched me. i fell, landing a little on front of the flames. i could feel the fire burning my flank. i found where it was, blending in with my fur, and rolled in some of the dust, putting it out. i got up, even though i couldnt see clearly, and dragged Silverpaw away. "help...fire! aprentices den..." i yelled, dropping her a safe distance away.
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Post by Sapphire on Aug 15, 2010 12:37:01 GMT -6
Silverpaw~ Silverpaw's fur was burnt.She was laying down hurt.Her pelt was full of color charcoal.
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Firetail
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Post by Firetail on Aug 15, 2010 12:56:36 GMT -6
i dragged myself over to her. "you okay?" i said, my voice ragged.
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Post by Sapphire on Aug 15, 2010 13:04:54 GMT -6
Silverpaw woke up."Yes*Cough*Thank you for saving me."Silverpaw licked him.
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Firetail
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Post by Firetail on Aug 15, 2010 13:08:02 GMT -6
"welcome." i said. but we gotta do something about that fire." i said between coughs.
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Post by Sapphire on Aug 15, 2010 13:09:02 GMT -6
"Maybe I will die and bring water as a cloudclan spirit."Silverpaw mewed.
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Firetail
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Post by Firetail on Aug 15, 2010 13:13:09 GMT -6
"no. i wont let you leave." i said.
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Post by Sapphire on Aug 15, 2010 13:15:33 GMT -6
"Well it may help."Silverpaw mewed.
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Firetail
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Post by Firetail on Aug 15, 2010 13:20:08 GMT -6
i shook my head. "still. i dont want you to die."
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Post by berrykit101 on Aug 15, 2010 13:21:49 GMT -6
Silverpaw's eyes sparkled."I will go in the fire and kick the dust.It could low the fire down."Silverpaw mewed.
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