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Post by Morningdew on Sept 26, 2010 13:32:57 GMT -6
Ohhhh ok, makes sense 'cause he really seems to be embarrassed of her telling Kite, you know reliving the memory:D
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Holly
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A feisty ginger she-cat. Pretty. Black Widow pretty. [Mo0:3]
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Post by Holly on Sept 26, 2010 14:56:32 GMT -6
^^ Yea...Hey, any con. criticism? I will either write a page today or 2 tomorrow so...I would like to have an idea of what I need to improve on and whatnot! ^^
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Post by Morningdew on Sept 26, 2010 17:31:15 GMT -6
Hmm....none that I can think of, other than quite a few grammar errors I HAD to fix while reading it:/
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Post by Holly on Sept 26, 2010 18:53:08 GMT -6
Quite a few? I only noticed 2 yesterday, I fixed them on my document but didn't repost it up here. Would you mind pointing them out to me?
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Post by Fernpelt on Oct 1, 2010 19:46:03 GMT -6
*cries* I wrote 2 pages, took me a while....I saved it but when i opened the file...it was gone!!!
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Post by Fernpelt on Oct 22, 2010 22:01:34 GMT -6
I haven't written lately because I have no encouragement or call-outs. >.<
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