Post by Russet on Jan 11, 2011 7:17:48 GMT -6
Hey, so I'm writing a story about my character growing up and not knowing who is background is and who is mom and dad are.
So, heres chapter one:
SkyPine sighed, her four kits stirred restlessly around her. Sitting in the shadows was a dark tom whos eyes blazed the darkness. The tom stepped forward to speak. "Are you ready SkyPine" he mewed.
"Ready for what" SkyPine questioned, her voice fading to a whisper.
"You know what i'm talking about" the tom replied gruffly "you know what we have to do with our kits".
"OakClaw, you know why we cant do that!" Skypine mewed back, shocked. Every hair on the queens pelt prickled and her eyes were clouded with worry. "There is nowhere to take them, they will die!".
"You are in danger" OakTail growled "You and the kits, we should take them into the rogue territories another she-cat will find them and take care of them". SkyPine finally nodded, she knew her mate was right. "Fine" she whispered "you take those two and I will take Russet and Night" SkyPine picked up the ginger kit and the black kit and hurried out of the nursery. The camp was eerily quiet that night, the only sound was their soft pad of footsteps as they padded into the darkness of the forest. As they reached the borders SkyPine shivered, the scent of rogue hung in the air and stuck to her fluffy fur.
OakClaw was racing along the forest floor ahead fo her and all she could see of him was the tip of his long bushy tail. Suddenly he stopped SkyPine skidded to a halt and rammed into her mate."Hey, watch it!" he hissed "We can leave the kits here under this tree,there is a little cave we can set them in it's sheltered from the Outside". SkyPine padded up to her mate side and set the kits she had been carrying in the small cave she sqeezed into the cave to see the inside for herself. As she looked around she noticed there was moss growing on the walls. She began to scrape the moss into a nest on the floor. As she positioned each kit in the nest she touched her nose to its soft fur."Goodbye" she murmered to each kit.
So, heres chapter one:
Russets Journey
SkyPine sighed, her four kits stirred restlessly around her. Sitting in the shadows was a dark tom whos eyes blazed the darkness. The tom stepped forward to speak. "Are you ready SkyPine" he mewed.
"Ready for what" SkyPine questioned, her voice fading to a whisper.
"You know what i'm talking about" the tom replied gruffly "you know what we have to do with our kits".
"OakClaw, you know why we cant do that!" Skypine mewed back, shocked. Every hair on the queens pelt prickled and her eyes were clouded with worry. "There is nowhere to take them, they will die!".
"You are in danger" OakTail growled "You and the kits, we should take them into the rogue territories another she-cat will find them and take care of them". SkyPine finally nodded, she knew her mate was right. "Fine" she whispered "you take those two and I will take Russet and Night" SkyPine picked up the ginger kit and the black kit and hurried out of the nursery. The camp was eerily quiet that night, the only sound was their soft pad of footsteps as they padded into the darkness of the forest. As they reached the borders SkyPine shivered, the scent of rogue hung in the air and stuck to her fluffy fur.
OakClaw was racing along the forest floor ahead fo her and all she could see of him was the tip of his long bushy tail. Suddenly he stopped SkyPine skidded to a halt and rammed into her mate."Hey, watch it!" he hissed "We can leave the kits here under this tree,there is a little cave we can set them in it's sheltered from the Outside". SkyPine padded up to her mate side and set the kits she had been carrying in the small cave she sqeezed into the cave to see the inside for herself. As she looked around she noticed there was moss growing on the walls. She began to scrape the moss into a nest on the floor. As she positioned each kit in the nest she touched her nose to its soft fur."Goodbye" she murmered to each kit.