Post by darkjay on May 7, 2011 12:58:20 GMT -6
Okay, okay, okay, okay, okay! I'm really excited about this book I'm writing. It's called Vampire legends! I'm writing the prologue and first two chapters! Please Tell me it's good!
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PROLOGUE
Once, a young vampire was created, to live a legend that no one had ever lived in. She grew strong, feasting on animal blood only. She loved a man, and soon they were married. Human and Vampire. Vampire and Human. So original. They adopted a young girl, at age of one. She died soon after, and her daughter was created to relive that legend.
Chapter One:
A Young Girl
I opened my eyes and a burn so bad flashed across my throat. I had been a child of a female vampire for 12 years now. My name is Ala Hughe. I am twelve years old and am in sixth grade. My friends call me paley, my skin is so pale. I haven't told them why yet. Their blood, so, so yummy smelling. I couldn't resist it.
Once, I bit one of my friends, just out of natural habit. I had gotten suspended for a week. She died after a month of burning. That was just a week ago she died. My father died when I was little. I lived on my own for a while. Then I was adopted. My last name should be Janeru.
Chapter Two:
School
I walked into the building, my golden eyes sweeping the room. "Hi Paley!" One of my friends called. I flinched, gazing around the room. I was new, only being here for a few months. Sighing, I walked slowly to my desk. I sat alone in the corner of the room. So tempting... I thought miserably.
Going through first period, math, was horrible. Everyone was loud, when I was rather quiet, working on pre-algebra. Whimpering quietly, I turned my deask around to face the other way. My teacher, Ms. Hambridge, was fine with it. My friends and everyone else jeered and giggled at me.
I cried crylessly into my arms and dashed out of the classroom.....
((To be continued....))
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PROLOGUE
Once, a young vampire was created, to live a legend that no one had ever lived in. She grew strong, feasting on animal blood only. She loved a man, and soon they were married. Human and Vampire. Vampire and Human. So original. They adopted a young girl, at age of one. She died soon after, and her daughter was created to relive that legend.
Chapter One:
A Young Girl
I opened my eyes and a burn so bad flashed across my throat. I had been a child of a female vampire for 12 years now. My name is Ala Hughe. I am twelve years old and am in sixth grade. My friends call me paley, my skin is so pale. I haven't told them why yet. Their blood, so, so yummy smelling. I couldn't resist it.
Once, I bit one of my friends, just out of natural habit. I had gotten suspended for a week. She died after a month of burning. That was just a week ago she died. My father died when I was little. I lived on my own for a while. Then I was adopted. My last name should be Janeru.
Chapter Two:
School
I walked into the building, my golden eyes sweeping the room. "Hi Paley!" One of my friends called. I flinched, gazing around the room. I was new, only being here for a few months. Sighing, I walked slowly to my desk. I sat alone in the corner of the room. So tempting... I thought miserably.
Going through first period, math, was horrible. Everyone was loud, when I was rather quiet, working on pre-algebra. Whimpering quietly, I turned my deask around to face the other way. My teacher, Ms. Hambridge, was fine with it. My friends and everyone else jeered and giggled at me.
I cried crylessly into my arms and dashed out of the classroom.....
((To be continued....))