My poem

[squirrel]

This poem does not have a title yet, but if anything im thinking of calling it the book of your life. Anyways, critique please? :D

Were all our own authors of our own lives
We write our own story and chose the ups and downs
We develop the plot, the end and the beginning
We chose the path the heroes cross and the foes they will face
We chose when the sun shall shine and when the rain shall fall


When we write this book of life
We follow it along with our strongest will
We live what we write
And write what we live
We all follow the same pages of this adventure

Don’t worry
Come along and enjoy the feeling of the flipping pages
Every second the pages will flip and the story will continue to pass
Those who read this special book won’t truly understand what it is
Only the authors who have written their book of essence can truly make it bloom

So don’t be shy
Read the book
You’ll be surprised of what will become
And maybe one day
You’ll be the author of your life as well