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Post by thethrush on Jul 27, 2011 0:09:35 GMT -6
~ Stranger ~
...Stranger I've known you for so long
I found you lost, with a compass in the fog... Thrushpaw was sitting in her nest. You could see that she wasn't
happy. But, that wasn't like her,because Thrushpaw as always
happy. If the clan didn't have enought food, she would be there,
cheering everyone up, and telling them it would be okay...
She missed her two only friends, Swiftkit and Silentpaw,
which seemed to have gone missing. They were the only friends
she had managed to make. 'Maybe it's the way Thrushpaw
talks...' She thought. She had always talked in
third person, weather she was thinking or speaking. Sometimes,
she would add 'na no da' at the end of her sentences. She had
no clue why she talked that way.
She felt like a stranger. All of the cats talked the same.
They never talk in third person! Why did she?! Maybe Cloudclan
hated her, or maybe something good would come out of it. She
doubted it, but it was still a thought. Was this why she was
having trouble making friends? She sighed, waiting for another
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Post by River on Jul 27, 2011 9:29:14 GMT -6
Leaftail-Leaftail peeked into the apprentice den, having heard that there was a new apprentice. She had also heard she was different, that she talked in third person, but so what? It just meant she wasn't like the other cats. She spotted her sitting in her nest. "Hi, you're Thrushpaw, right? I'm Leaftail."She mewed cheerfully.
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Post by leopardheart on Jul 27, 2011 9:34:42 GMT -6
Tinydapple saw Leaftail walk into the apprentices den. 'she must be looking for the new apprentice' she followed behind leaftail to see Thrushpaw, the new apprentcie. "hello Thrushpaw i'm Tinydapple!' she greeeted |
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Post by thethrush on Jul 27, 2011 12:11:55 GMT -6
...Stranger you know me to much
Illusionary-self had not been touched, until you...[I'm not new...]
She looked up at the cats. "Yup, I'm Thrushpaw." She mewed, getting
up. She looked at them. "Hello Leaftail, Tinnydapple..." She said, but
she still wasn't happy.
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Post by nighttail on Jul 27, 2011 17:10:49 GMT -6
"whats wrong?"asked nightpaw from her nest
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Foresthawk
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Post by Foresthawk on Aug 3, 2011 15:03:38 GMT -6
tigerkit walked with nightpaw to see what was wrong to wha what happend?
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Post by thethrush on Aug 7, 2011 18:03:26 GMT -6
...Humming Hallelujah in the dark,
Whispered poems, leave you to be..."Oh, Thrushpaw's fine guys." She said, looking
at them. "Thrushpaw just misses a few friends
is all. No problem." She explained.
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Post by nighttail on Aug 7, 2011 18:41:08 GMT -6
(TIGERPAW!repeatidly,you forget parentheses and quotation marks!didn't you go to school!?>.<)
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Post by thethrush on Aug 8, 2011 14:09:15 GMT -6
(OOC; Nightpaw, after every sentence you need a space, and you need to capatalize. AND you need a period at the end. You can't accuse Tigerpaw of that and not think you're doing anything wrong. "whats wrong?"asked nightpaw from her nest It should look like this "What's wrong?" Asked Nightpaw from her nest. Sorry for acting like staff, that just bugged me.) |
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Post by nighttail on Aug 8, 2011 14:28:19 GMT -6
(Put roleplaying as well as OOC would you?)"Tigerkit, this is none of your business, what are you doing here anyway?" Asked Nightpaw.
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Post by thethrush on Aug 8, 2011 14:30:59 GMT -6
(I'm sorry if I sound bossy...)
"I thought He was an apprentice..." She mumbled slightly.
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Post by nighttail on Aug 8, 2011 14:41:50 GMT -6
(it said Tigerkit, besides,does he even have a mentor yet?if not,hes still a kit)"Actually i'm not sure....."mumbled Nightpaw.
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Post by thethrush on Aug 8, 2011 14:45:23 GMT -6
(In his siggy it says he has a mentor. This is confusing...)
"Oh well..." She sighed, and sat down. She was still upset.
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Post by nighttail on Aug 9, 2011 6:27:14 GMT -6
"Well, heres some advice on not to get sadder. Avoid Emberpaw specifically"meowed Nightpaw."Erm, would anything make you feel better?Maybe some private hunting with someone, walks maybe?"Nightpaw hinted. Nightpaw liked attention, but not too much.
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Post by thethrush on Aug 11, 2011 13:26:05 GMT -6
"What's wrong with Emberpaw?" She asked her. She had met him once. He didn't seem to bad. Of course, when it came to insults, she was oblivious. "And, I think I'll just let it slip." She added. |
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