Post by eaglewind on Mar 11, 2012 9:49:58 GMT -6
I have written two summaries of books I was randomly thinking of. I really need feedback, and yes, I still have some rough edges to clean up.
Summary 1:
Summary 2:
Which one do you like best? Also, any ideas for a science fiction fantasy story? I love those genres and I also love writing.
Summary 1:
She woke up here, how did she come to be on this place? Who took her here? A girl, abandon on a huge island that is uninhabited. She has to find a way off the island, when she is in the middle of it. All alone, with mystery, horror, and action, she must overcome her fears to survive on this death trap. But, she is timed. If she doesn’t get off the island soon, she will disappear forever. This is a test of her strength and wit. Will she pass the test? Or will she crumple under the pressure and be forgotten in the world forever?
Summary 2:
Hawaii. The place of dreams and palm trees. Where coconuts are the main food source and the ocean is your best friend. But, not when a tornado rips through. Tornadoes almost never rip through here, or so I thought. It was the largest they had ever seen. Destroying the entire island. Well, this is the story of the girl who had to go through it all. The tornado, the aftermath, the danger that lurks just around the corner. For, she is kidnapped in the middle of the tornado. They take her to a secret underground cavern. She can’t leave, she has to escape. But, the storms still rage and shake the earth. How can she possibly get out? It’s a death trap, and she has to get out before they kill her.
Which one do you like best? Also, any ideas for a science fiction fantasy story? I love those genres and I also love writing.
