Come to come, come to see, come to.. Conquer?

[Ebonypaw]

(Redstorm PM'd me asking if I wanted to post here.)

It was a cold morning, bitter and quite terrible. There may have even been a rare spot of frost here and there. Nasty, bitter morning. A long-hair she-cat stumbled out of the apprentice den absently, not really taking notice of anything. Her mistake. She just about leapt into the air at the bite of the chilly air. Landing, she put her head down and just sprinted forward, across the camp and straight into a den she'd never been in before. And, on top of charging into the elders' den, her head collided with the back wall, putting a hole in it. Not exactly great ventilation on a freezing-cold morning.

[Redstorm]

"What in the name of Clo-" He muttered, getting cut off as the she-cat charged right into the back wall. As he looked, somewhat shocked, he noticed the hole she had created. "You better fix that now." He hissed, sitting up.

"What were you thinking, charging into the den like that? I almost thought you were trying to attack one of us elders!"

[Ebonypaw]

Ebonypaw backed out of the messed up wall and frowned, ears flattened as she was scolded by an elder, who she guessed was Redstorm. There were only two elders, after all. She had a 50% chance of getting it right.
"Of course, sir." She nodded quaintly, bowing her head, and started to look around just outside the den.
"I got a fright from how cold it was. I'm sorry, sir." Ebonypaw said rather nervously.

[Redstorm]

"A fright..Of the cold? Lad, you live in Iceclan. It is cold almost all year." He muttered, shaking his head in amusement. "You best be learning to get used to the frosty wind and the snow. Leaf-bare arrives soon enough."

[Ebonypaw]

"Haha, I know. Leaf-bare will be nasty, goodness." Ebony said quietly, returning with a branch held tightly between her sharp white teeth. It tasted rather disgusting. But then again, she wasn't going to act as if those trees would be around forever. For example, TreeClan's misfortunes with the fire.
"I think this'll be okay. Maybe if I get some more brambles later." She mewed almost silently to herself, starting to make basic repairs on the wall. She had never fixed a den before, but an experience on this would be good for her.

[Goldenwind]

goldenkit padded into the elders den hoping to get a story when she realized she walked right into the middle of redstorm scolding a appretice they look down taking notice of her.

[Waspwing]

(Hi Goldenkit, I'm Waspwing. I'm also Redstorm. First of all, this thread is private. That means only Redstorm and Ebonypaw should be posting here. Also, please don't say something like 'They look down at her and notice her.' That is considered power-play, which is against VWW rules. It's an honest mistake, and you aren't in trouble. I'm just telling you to make sure you don't make the mistake again.

If you have any questions, comments or concerns please feel free to PM me. I would be more than happy to help you)