Roleplay Check III

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Name: Rosemarykit
Age: 0 moons
Sex: Female
Clan: IceClan
Mother: Ivycloud
Father: ----

Coat Color: Pure white
Eye Color: vivid aqua
Build: tiny and lithe
Disabilities: Bline
Overall Appearance; She has a pure white coat. It's length is very long. She is tiny for her age, but will become more lithe and muscular as she gets older. Her eyes are a bright vivid aqua color, and she is blind.

Likes: Mice, friends, voles
Dislikes: wide open spaces, being alone
Strengths: She is brave, confident, smart,and intelligent.
Weaknesses: She is very shy
Personality Overview: She likes mice and voles and dislikes fish. They are to slimy for her. She likes tiny places, but hates wide open spaces and being alone. She also likes making friends. She is very shy, yet she is brave, confident, smart, and intelligent.

Wind was blowing from the south. Rosemarykit could hear it, but not see it. She did not know it yet,but soon she would make some new friends. Although, because of her shy personality, it would be very difficult, and even more so because of her blindness.

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The Basics

Name: Faithkit
Age: 0 moons
Sex: She-cat
Clan: IceClan.
Mother: Adopted to Shadefrost
Father: Unknown

Looks

Coat color: Ginger, often looks golden
Eye color: Ember-like orange
Build: Lithe
Disabilities/Differences: N/A

Personality

Likes: Snow, water, running, playing with other kits, silence, everyone being happy
Dislikes: Loud noises, being alone, large crowds, seeing others cry
Strengths: She has great faith(earning her the name Faithkit) and is always making sure others are happy
Weaknesses: Her size and the fact that she boasts often(though she makes up for both of her weaknesses very well)
Personality overview: Faithkit is a very faithful and caring kit that would do anything to please others and make sure that her way is fair for everyone. She hates seeing others upset and will often try to comfort them, though obeys the command, "leave me alone." Though she does boast often and is very small, she makes up for this in various ways that make her enjoyable for many others.

I decided on choosing the nightmare prompt...

All was silent in the forest other than the trickle of water from a nearby stream. The full-moon shone brightly over-head, lighting up every corner, every leaf. Yet all was not as peaceful as it seemed. Weaving through the trees was a flash of gold, belonging to a young kit. Her paws skimmed lightly over the ground, her muscles bunching and stretching as she ran. With ember eyes alight with fear she dared a glance over her shoulder. The dark creature followed her once more, creeping closer and closer. Forcing her tiny legs to their limit the kit sped along, aware of the hot breath on her neck. She heard a low growl like thunder, echoing through the trees. She wasn't sure if she was going to make it...

But wait! Was that water she heard? It was! Suddenly she put on an extra bust of speed. I belong to Iceclan! I can swim! she told herself. The water was in sight now. She raced toward it, her whole body aching, her heart and lungs screaming at her to stop. But the water came no closer, the creature drew nearer..."Have faith!" Her mother's familiar voice struck he ears, but she was too scared to turn back. Then it happened, the creature let out a furious bark and leaped, and all that was left was darkness...

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The Basics

Name: Kinkkit
Age: 0 moons
Sex: Female
Clan: IceClan
Mother: Ivycloud
Father: Unknown

Looks

Coat color: Brown tabby
Eye color: Brown
Build: Slender with powerful shoulders
Disabilities/Differences: 
Overall appearance: Kinkkit is a dark-ish brown tabby she-cat.  She has deep, vivid brown eyes and soft ears. Kinkkit is in general slender, but she has powerful shoulders and surprising strength for her build.  [this is her build as an adult.]

Personality

Likes: Snowflakes, chasing things, sunbathing, play-fighting, contentment, voles.
Dislikes: Water, fish, loud noises, blood, being alone.
Strengths: Determined, loyal and hard-working.  Outgoing, likes seeing her clan-mates happy.
Weaknesses: Can be arrogant, sometimes too concentrated on training that she forgets about her friends.
Personality overview:  Kinkkit is very determined to train well.  This boosts her concentration, which is surely a bonus, but it can make her a bit neglectful towards her friends.  She enjoys nothing more than play-fighting with her den-mates, which suggests that she will become a good fighter.  Kinkkit is generally outgoing, and likes to see her clanmates content.  However she can sometimes be arrogant as well, and thinks that if she trains really hard she'll be the best warrior in IceClan.  Kinkkit is also very loyal.

Nightmare!

Kinkkit's panic rose to her throat, choking her.  Blood roared in her ears.  Or was that the sound of the river?  Her muscles were screaming at her to stop, but she didn't dare to look back.  Darkness engulfed the tiny kit.  The tunnel was narrow, rough stone scraping her heaving flanks.  Through all the noise the tabby thought she could hear her heart thudding, faster than a mouse.  Her soft paws ached; they weren't used to the cold, hard stone.  But still she didn't stop, her paws working furiously, kicking up droplets of water.  If her panic didn't choke her, her own fear scent would.  I want my mother!

The images flashed in Kinkkit's mind; a small innocent kit, accidentally tumbling into a network of tunnels.  Its instinct told it to turn back, but the kit was overpowered by curiosity.  Rain started thudding against the roof, getting faster and louder.  Soon, the floor was underwater.   The tunnels were flooding.  There was a terrifying roaring; a river of flood water thundering through the caves.  Kinkkit pushed on, her breaths turning to struggled gasps.  She wouldn't make it.

The raging torrent caught up with her, sweeping her up as if she were nothing more than a leaf.  With her mouth open in a silent wail, Kinkkit kicked and writhed, trying to reach the surface but to no avail.  So this was it, then?  She had been born only to die?  Her fearful brown eyes narrowed as they detected a soothing light, filtering down from the surface.  CloudClan?

Kinkkit awoke with a gasp, her terrified eyes wide.  Her panting echoed throughout the nursery, and kits woke up with grouchy moans.  

"Shut up, Kinkkit!"

"Mouse-brain, why did you wake us?!"

"You look like a frightened vole!"

"Who woke me up?"

"That would be hedgehog-fur over there."

Kinkkit flattened her ears, willing herself not to cry.  Only her mother comforted her, rasping her tongue gently over her ruffled fur.  The queen glared at the other kits, and they hastily closed their eyes again.

Other

Kinkkit is afraid of water and tunnels / caves due to her nightmare.  She trains so hard because she is afraid she'll be a failure to the clan, and also to make up for her fears.

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The Basics
Name: Sunkit
Age: 4 moons
Sex: Female
Clan: Iceclan
Mother: Rosedapple
Father: A rogue


Looks
Coat color: Dark ginger
Eye color: a pale blue
Build: frail
Disabilities/Differences: None
Overall appearance: Sunkit is a small, frail she-cat with fairly large ears and long features. Her fur is short, but very thick and fluffy. It is also dark ginger, with lighter highlights; there are dark stripes that encase her in a mackerel tabby pattern. Her eyes are a pale blue, which might suggest she's blind, but she's not.


Personality
Likes: sunning, playing in snow, play fighting, getting on others nerves, questioning authority
Dislikes: Getting in trouble, getting caught, rain, heat, full out fighting, toms
Strengths: Running and fighting. She's very ambitious, and strives to live accordingly.
Weaknesses: Sunkit likes to question authority, and often gets into trouble. She's overall cheeky and mischievous.
Personality overview: Sunkit is bright, cheeky, tolerable, and patient. She's ambitious and strives to live accordingly. Sunkit likes to question authority, and often gets into trouble. She's overall cheeky and mischievous.

[Oceankit]

The Basics

Name: Oceankit
Age: One moon
Sex: Female
Clan: IceClan.
Mother: Unknown
Father: Unknown



Looks

Coat color: A very dark blue, almost like tar but with a more dark grey stir to it.
Eye color: A dawning sky blue.
Build: Skinny with muscles that blend into her sides.
Overall appearance: Oceankit is a very dark cat with few markings that take less than her overall body, she has a lighter chest marking covering less than most of her chest and light socks on all fours. Strangly she has stripes leading up her tail to its very tip.



Personality

Likes: Due to hating climbing, she has come to rather like swimming instead. What many do not know is that she also likes to explore and disappear entirely for days at a time before reappearing as if nothing had happened. For that freedom she has a tendency to lie well and enjoy it lots too.
Dislikes: Ocean hates climbing, although she does fairly well at it she dislikes not being able to suddenly run away or attack if needed.
Strengths: Fighting and Swimming
Weaknesses: Oceankit is not very good with talking to others in a simple friendly matter she rather hang alone or insult and teese cats along the way making many dislike talking to her. She also is not the ultimate hunter, making her also not the best tracker.
Personality overview: Oceankit is a real stubborn sassy cat, she does have a fair bit of ambition but is also not the best at talking to others as she desperately wanted friends she never really got the crowd attention making her one to appreciate what she has and never be crushed when someone tries to. She is usually a bit careless when it comes to something she could care less about, but if she doesnt want you to know about something. You won't know.


Roleplay Sample:
Deep blue eyes scanned the area as a small creature paced back and forth moving little nuts to a small pile for its hibernation. Intently the dark cat sprung from her hiding grasping nothing but nuts as the creature hauled itself up the tree faster than you could say mouse. She cursed under her breath glaring at her small catch, great who's hungry for nuts! She thought with disappointment and disapproval flowing through her mind, why couldn't she be like everyone else, they could easily talk to others while she shuddered and studdered at the thought.

[Darkpool]

The Basics
Name: Darkkit
Age: 4 moons
Sex: Female
Clan: IceClan
Mother: Rosedapple
Father: Unknown. (Arn't they all?)


Looks
Coat color: Jet black.
Eye color: Deep blue, ice blue if angry or scared
Build: Sleek and Bulky
Overall appearance: A jet black she-cat with deep blue eyes, Darkkit is a quite simple kit with her eyes the only exception.


Personality
Likes: Pretending to be deputy. Dreaming of warrior name. Play fighting and moss ball. Elder's Stories.
Dislikes: Spiders. Water. Fights. Evil.
Strengths: Big and Muscular. Fighting, her body was made for it.
Weaknesses: Water and Spiders, kinda climbing (she's an average/kinda bad climber)
Personality overview: Darkkit is pretty hyper, and she has never ever been shy in her entire life. She can be sad at some points, which is when you should stay away from her.

RP Sample:

Darkkit was tossing around the moss ball when she saw a spider on it. It climbed onto her paw, and she screeched in terror. "Get it off me!" she cried. Her mother came bounding in with a couple of warriors and when she saw the spider, she snorted. "A spider? Really, Darkkit?" she said. Darkkit didn't care. She screeched again. "Get it off me!" then she cried out as pain shot though her paw. "OW! IT BIT ME!" she cried. Then one of the warrior ran and came back with the medicine cat. "OW!" Darkkit cried again. The medicine cat went over and gently removed the stinger. It was very pointy and long. Darkkit then cried out in pain. Her paw spurted out blood. The sight of her own blood made Darkkit feel faint. Her mother then came over and started lapping at the wound, as the medicine cat put paste on it and wrapped it up with cobwebs. When she was gone, Darkkit burrowed into her mothers fur. "I'm never playing moss ball again!" she said. Her mother just purred and smoothed Darkkit's fur.

[Rivershade]

so i cant join as icekit i need a mom and father thought sorry im new. just tell me if im not allowed to join thanks.