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Post by Briarpelt on Nov 25, 2013 17:09:22 GMT -6
"Have I won?" Briarpaw lashed her tail.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 25, 2013 17:11:00 GMT -6
"No!" Lotuspaw threw Briarpaw off and bit down mercilessly.
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Post by Briarpelt on Nov 25, 2013 17:15:21 GMT -6
The teeth sank into her neck like a pair of thorns. Briarpaw' eyesight dimmed for a moment. "Must... not... die." Flinging Lotuspaw off, she bit like all of Cloudclan into the cat's neck.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 25, 2013 17:17:19 GMT -6
Lotuspaw schreeched in pain. She tried to throw Briarpaw off.
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Post by Briarpelt on Nov 25, 2013 17:23:18 GMT -6
Briarpaw leaped out of the cat's way. She threw out a claw.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 25, 2013 17:29:08 GMT -6
(wait, you threw a claw???)
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Post by Briarpelt on Nov 25, 2013 18:48:56 GMT -6
edit: briarkit swiped a claw at the dark-furred warrior.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 25, 2013 18:57:01 GMT -6
Lotuspaw hissed and countered with a swipe.
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Post by Briarpelt on Nov 25, 2013 19:01:20 GMT -6
(good cloudclam i'm a warior already)
briarkit twisted back, but noe gast enough. The sipe caught her on the shoulder and left three gashes. These gashes would stay there forever. a mark of briarkit's evil. briarkit flicked her tail, cursing some warrior cat x-rated words and leapt into battle. she scored her long claws into lotuspaw's shoulder.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 25, 2013 19:03:42 GMT -6
Lotuspaw had no time to dodge and schreeched as claws slashed her. She hissed and pounced on Briarpaw, sending a merciless bite on the shoulder.
(ikr!)
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Post by Briarpelt on Nov 25, 2013 19:07:08 GMT -6
my wounded shoulder. my bloody shoulder. the attack sent briarkit screeching. spinning around, she saw a way she could mortally injure, or even kill, lotuspaw. but she didn't. she had too much respect for this cat, after she had stood up to her time after time. "run or die." she hissed.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 25, 2013 19:30:25 GMT -6
"I wouldn't think I'd run easily or die easily!" Lotuspaw hissed.
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Post by Koisplash on Nov 25, 2013 19:35:26 GMT -6
Briarpaw, Lotuspaw, seriously. Please stop powerplaying. Give each other a chance to respond to each other's actions. Instead of saying "she bit down on her neck," change the wording to "she aimed to bite down on her neck". And also, your characters are newly made apprentices. I really doubt they'd be such skilled fighters at their ages. Also: The silver tabby she cat stretched to the tip of her toes. After he sickness, she was still healing, but could fight just as well as before. She knew someone was looking for revenge, most cats were. There probably were a few looking for revenge on her. But no matter. Even without proper battle training, Briarpaw could still fight. The trick was to fight like a rogue. She walked over to another apprentice. It was Lotuspaw. "Hello." She snarled. Briarpaw could be violent now, she didn't have Koisplash watching her every second of the day. How can Briarpaw fight without any battle training? How would she know how to fight like a rogue when she would never have been able to meet one before becoming an apprentice? Also, nice reference there to my OOC interference. This thread has just way too much powerplaying and godmodding. If you want to continue fighting, you can make another thread, but please stick to the rules. |
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