Post by Finchpaw on Mar 1, 2014 20:22:21 GMT -6
Ok, these are poems I made and I will update them when I made another one. You can make suggestions or ask me to just write something. Ok, so here's my first poem...
Omens
Suspicious shadows on the moor
Strange symbols by the shore
Omens, omens, Cloudclan pasts
Of clan's futures or their pasts
(Feedback is appreciated)
Fine, not many people commented, so I'll add another one, this one a lot longer:
The Pheonix
Deep in the snowy forest
In the center of the wood
Lies an ashen nest
Where a mighty bird once stood
Her feathers fiery scarlet
Her age ten millionand six
Her eyes the wisest you've ever met
Her name was the Pheonix
As she fanned a baby kindle
And as she watched it turn it flame
And as the wood slowly began to curl
Pheonix knew she'd be the same
She screeched a piercing cry
That would be her second last
Then plunged into the flaming depths
Leaving behind her past
The Pheonix screamed and flapped her wings
In both pain and fear
But she knew in her majestic heart
That her end was not at all near
When she blackened into ash
And disintegrated in the fire
You might as what her mind was thinking
With the consequences so dire
Suddenly the ashes rumbled
And a cry again shook the night
The Pheonix was alive again
As she burst into sight
With a thrust of her wings
An ambitious look in her eye
The Pheonix had been born again
As it disappeared into the sky
When you think of the Pheonix
With her cry of pain and fear
How herself she did fix
How her past she did clear
*Bows*
Omens
Suspicious shadows on the moor
Strange symbols by the shore
Omens, omens, Cloudclan pasts
Of clan's futures or their pasts
(Feedback is appreciated)
Fine, not many people commented, so I'll add another one, this one a lot longer:
The Pheonix
Deep in the snowy forest
In the center of the wood
Lies an ashen nest
Where a mighty bird once stood
Her feathers fiery scarlet
Her age ten millionand six
Her eyes the wisest you've ever met
Her name was the Pheonix
As she fanned a baby kindle
And as she watched it turn it flame
And as the wood slowly began to curl
Pheonix knew she'd be the same
She screeched a piercing cry
That would be her second last
Then plunged into the flaming depths
Leaving behind her past
The Pheonix screamed and flapped her wings
In both pain and fear
But she knew in her majestic heart
That her end was not at all near
When she blackened into ash
And disintegrated in the fire
You might as what her mind was thinking
With the consequences so dire
Suddenly the ashes rumbled
And a cry again shook the night
The Pheonix was alive again
As she burst into sight
With a thrust of her wings
An ambitious look in her eye
The Pheonix had been born again
As it disappeared into the sky
When you think of the Pheonix
With her cry of pain and fear
How herself she did fix
How her past she did clear
*Bows*
