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Post by Deleted on Mar 18, 2015 13:37:59 GMT -6
Tears came to the eyes of Lumine. "I have a place that we can go." She volenteered. Aluna looked at her. She knew exactly what she meant. "I wish not to stay at the clans." Lumine said. "You guys are ignoed or glared at, but at least you are not in my situation. At four trees my litter mates and I are in a bad situation." She said. "I always disappear during the meetings. You don't care. You don't even notice when I come back injured!" Her voice grew to a yell. "We will not go back to the clans if you don't want you o. At the very least could we go to my pack? They would except you. They would accept us willingly and not glare at us rudely or ignoe us." She paused for a moment. "There is like be one thing you must put up with in my pack." She laughed. "You must fight to grow in ranks. My mother is beta, my father is alpha. We will be safe in my pack." She said:
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Post by Deleted on Mar 18, 2015 14:32:21 GMT -6
Carmine scratched at the ground.
"We can go with your pack. But I didn't notice because... I blocked out everyone except for Kage. After a while it was easy to ignore everyone but him... To me... He was the one who stood up for me. Always. I'm sorry I didn't notice. I'm not any better then any other demons... Like the ones in the stories where they kill everyone..." He looked up at Lumine. Then cracking a crooked smile.
"Fight to grow in ranks? I'm a demon. That ain't gonna stop me."
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Post by Deleted on Mar 18, 2015 20:42:21 GMT -6
((We need more action, not some sobby story about where the heck they're gonna live.))
Faithsong shuffled her paws. She didn't want to leave. But if her friends were going to....
Then, suddenly, the world began to shake. Her silver eyes widened, and the mute cat whirled around wildly. She hadn't noticed the dark green clouds. She hadn't noticed the overflowing rivers just nearby. Thunder roared overhead, rain began to beat down so quickly she thought was was imaging it. The earth continued to rock and howl, and giant fissures tore open the ground. Four snakes of wind drifted down from the skies, twisting around and touching land to form tornadoes. The water flooded over, instantly covering the land within seconds, just two inches high and rising. Lightning strikes above.
What in the name of StarClan-? Faithsong didn't finish her thought as the ground opened up beneath her. She thought it was kind of funny, how moments earlier she wanted this very thing to happen. But when she felt herself plunging into darkness, terror of realization dawned on her. She let out a loud, horrible shriek of a cat who never said a thing, with the scream cracking and sounding hollow and painful. Then the black swallowed her white form, where no one could find her.
The ground continued to grumble, and water from the rivers streamed down into the giant crack Faithsong had disappeared through. The four twisters were tearing up the land, each seeming to have landed in all the Clan's territories. Lightning hit the borders along rouge territory, starting fires and collapsing trees.
It was as if StarClan was trapping the Clan's inside, wanting the weather to murder every innocent kit and elder within.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 18, 2015 23:26:18 GMT -6
"Come on!" She said. It had been a while scince her pack had used this entrance. "Follow me." She said. "It is not long, but a fall could be scary." She added before leaping down ledge be ledge.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 19, 2015 5:08:31 GMT -6
Luckily, Carmine had demon powers. He used mystical black clouds to help himself and Lumine across all the ledges and so forth.
"WELL THIS SUCKS" He declared.
He pondered on how he could fix this....
Maybe he could use TRY using his demon powers to their full extent, he'd never done that before. Even now, he wasn't even using a fourth of it.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 19, 2015 6:00:28 GMT -6
When she could still not see the bottom Lumine jumped. She landed flawlessly on the stone floor. "Faithsong, are you ok?" she asked. she paused as a wolf approched. 'Lumine? Is that really you?' the male wolf asked. "Who else would approuch this pack cats?" she growled affectionately. This was Honi. Lumine had never told the other cats of how she camme back here every now and then. At thoose times the two wolves had fallen in love. "I must say, it's been a while since I last came. I promised you that I would eventually settle down and stay with the pack. Well, now is that time." she added. Honi smiled. "I suppose I should go get your father. He will want to know of your return." he said as he walked away. Lumine turned to Carmine. She smiled. "Time to find Kage." she said. This camp was a large passage underground. They could easily find Kage walking and bring him down. Her father would soon be here. She had to see him first, as he would be the one to bring Kage down.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 19, 2015 9:46:02 GMT -6
As the earth continued to rattle above, Faithsong shivered in the cold. Where was she? It was dark. Very dark. And cold. Struggling to her paws, She noticed water seeping in around her. Panicked, she felt around, noticing she was in a skinny and deep crevice. Help! she thought in horror. I'm gonna drown!
But then she realized something. Her dragon form. She could just fly out of here. Taking a deep breath, the white cat shifted her fur into scales, and in an instant shot upwards-hoping that was the right way. Thunder still roared in the distance, and she wondered how far she had fallen.
Then she burst into light. Where was she? Staring out at the land, she suppressed a horrid cry in her throat. The land was barren and destroyed. Water fell over twisted trees and stones. Dead animals litters the place. The twisters were gone, the storm was leaving, the earthquake had frozen. Landing with a soft thud, she noticed a group of cats off in the distance. She strained her ears to listen in.
"We're the last of our Clans." said Duskflight of ShadowClan, kin to the great Tigerstar from years ago and Tawnypelt. Beside the brown-and-black tabby stood Willowpaw, Fallingleaf, and Stonesong of her Clan.
"How could StarClan do this?" wailed Hummingbird, the great granddaughter of Foxblood in RiverClan. Silverfish, Mistmouse, and Lizardpaw were huddled by her side.
"StarClan doesn't exist." hissed Ryefrost of WindClan, the great great niece of Heathertail. Beside her was ___paw, ___, and ___ of WindClan as well.
"Lies." muttered Roseslash of ThunderClan. "StarClan spared us, didn't it? We're here to rebuild our Clans anew." At her side was ___, ___, and ___paw.
Faithsong, gathering her courage, trotted up to the group in cat form and got their attention. She nodded at the night sky, the stars, and then at the mess and then at Roseslash, agreeing with her Clanmate. Giving a small smile, she tried her best to answer their questions, and finally came to a little understanding.
They would rebuild the Clans. Roseslash, Ryefrost, Duskflight, and Hummingbird would be leaders. New Clans. A new home.
And to make it better, out from the rubble came a white form. She trotted over, giving the cats a sad smile.
"There was always five Clans in the forest." Icewish meowed. "When we are five once more, peace will last. StarClan promises this."
((*sighs* whew...finally wrote this thing... lazily....))
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Post by Deleted on Mar 19, 2015 13:21:29 GMT -6
Roseslash looked over at Faithsong. She smiled.
"Faithsong! It's you!" Then she looked over at Icewish.
"So... We must rebuild the clans." She pondered this for a bit. "The clan's way of life wasn't flawless. I don't think we should just build them back up... We need to make them better. If this was divine retribution for the clans treatment of Faithsong and her siblings... We need to make sure this never happens again." The fire burned in her eyes. "I always hated how they were treated."
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"Kage is too full of hatred. I don't think someone like him could belong with us anymore." He said.
Regarding the wolves... They were slightly surprised by the humongous polar bear-sized fox... But he assumed they were okay since he was with Lumine. He looked to Lumine.
"Er just asking... Will things be fine with me being a demon and all that? There's a lot of legends painting them in a horrible light...." In actuality... Carmine found that his demon powers could be twisted either way. But he came to the conclusion that the only demons who came out and got remembered were the sadistic ones... Giving them all a bad name.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 20, 2015 7:12:24 GMT -6
Faithsong dipped her head to Roseslash in agreement.
"Our Clan was just as terrible." growled Hummingbird. "It was like we purposely chose a single kit and treated them like crow-food just to punish StarClan."
Ryefrost tilted her head. "Then new Clans? Where will we live? How will we survive?" she cast cold purple eyes(Heatherstar had, like, violet eyes or something?) on Icewish. "And adding another Clan? What will we be?"
Icewish smiled, "Perhaps... I'll be leader of IceClan." she suggested.
Ryefrost of WindClan bristled. "A leader? Your quite ambitious, aren't you?" Turning to her Clanmates, the she-cat scowled. "I'll be leader of BreezeClan, then. To honor my Clan and the twisters that tore it apart."
"I call my Clan... RainClan. In honor of the rain that started us." meowed Hummingbird.
((Does Snow want to be Duskflight/star?))
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Post by Deleted on Mar 20, 2015 9:46:03 GMT -6
Lumine lost her attention to the cats when she had herd about the clans. "Oh, but there aren't enough cats to make new clans." She said. "AT least let me help with that." She said. "I am going to go and come back with someone else." She said. She looked at the cats around her. A scent caught her attention. "See you." She said. She fallowed the scent until she found some river clan cats. "Nadia!" She said. She looked back the way they came. "All of you, come. She said as the cats made there way back to the other cats.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 20, 2015 12:32:35 GMT -6
Roseslash nodded. Her three companions, Tawnylight, Silverfang, and Lavenderstorm standing beside her. "I will be the leader of Dawnclan. To symbolize the dawn of a new era. Age. Thing. Whatever, doesn't matter what we consider this. Anyways... We're not enough cats to repopulate the clans entirely. We need to be more lenient with allowing cats not born of clan blood to join us." Her eyes sparkled. "I think if they have the heart of a warrior, they more than deserve to be taught our ways."
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Post by Deleted on Mar 20, 2015 13:03:38 GMT -6
Ryefrost bared her fangs. "Sure. Let's let kittypets become warriors." Though her eyes shown she silently accepted this fact. "Where will we live? Over the mountains again?"
((Do you want to be Duskflight, Celestia?))
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Post by Deleted on Mar 20, 2015 15:09:11 GMT -6
Lumine looked at the other cats. "I would like to be lease of a clan. This clan would be called Doveclan in honor of the fact that we will accept all animals. These animals would include wolves, foxes, and cats who wish to live in peace." She said. They were making new clans. A new warrior code would also help. "I also have an idea. Each of these new clans shal have a special trait of their own. For example, if you accept my clan would have two leaders and deputies. One would be male and one female." She said looking at hawk, her brother, who was sitting next to her. "Hawk would be the male leader." She added on. She hoped with all her heart that the others would except her proposal. "Also, by my decree, my clan will be open to other clan cats that need rest, or have injuries."
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Post by Deleted on Mar 20, 2015 19:12:04 GMT -6
((Um... I thought the wolves were, like, somewhere else... the cats here are more near WindClan territory. Faithsong disappeared closer to ThunderClan, and I would guess the wolves went to their pack somewhere in rouge territory... that's what I think at least,))
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Post by Deleted on Mar 20, 2015 19:45:20 GMT -6
((Eh.. Give Dusk to Snowblossom))
Roseslash thought about it. "Factoring in the fact our group isn't huge... I think we should go over the mountains. The land here is completely destroyed... Those twisters ravaged the land here... Probably killing all sources of prey and shelter." She took a deep breath.
"Special trait for each of our clans? Mine... Family loyalty." Her eyes burned with intense fire. "Each clan should be like a family unit. Undeniable, unbreakable bonds that shouldn't even need a single second to decide to protect them. You don't hurt family... I'm never letting anyone be hurt like Faithsong and Deadheart were. Never again! Anyone who joins Dawnclan must understand that everyone in my clan will never be hurt by another member of the clan."
She looked at Lumine.
"I agree. My clan will also be open to visitors. Although... If anyone threatens my 'family clan'.... I won't hesitate." She let the threat hang in the air.
"Aside from that... We should remove the parts of the code that prohibit certain love relations. It's not fair for cats to be shunned for love."
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