Where did this come from?!

[Asterheart]

There's this...Then the non coloured one...
And then this terrible looking thing...

Anyways, now that that terrible art is posted, any thoughts? Suggestions, critiques, pointers? Please don't flame/hate without a good point. May do requests if I don't get any worse. Will edit, outlying and Color properly on my computer for requests(if I ever get a new one that is) if I accept any.

Thought I might share due to the inspiration given to me by tiger, flurr and all those other beautiful artists out there...

~Cedar

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First off I think the paws are great. I never seem to be able to do paws, so I generally just do cute little stubs now. But yours are quite nice.
In terms of critique, I'd say try not to make the tail so still looking. Cat tails tend to generally curl and flow rather gently. Aside from that, in the sitting down one, I'd suggest probably looking at cat proportions, just because the hind-legs seem to be so much smaller than the rest of his body. c:

I really like them so far, so I hope you keep practicing!

[Asterheart]

Thank you, I'm glad someone likes them! I will do as you suggested, maybe I should pay more attention to my little kits? I think they'd be a pretty helpful reference.

Thanks, ~Cedar

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Your art is far from terrible, trust me. Snailpaw made some excellent points, so I'm gonna leave out critique since I have no other points to be made. The one sitting down is very cute, I like the way you drew the stripes~

[Whitepaw]

These are nice!

[Asterheart]

Thank you, I hope to do some more some day