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Post by Stormsong on Oct 2, 2016 16:35:09 GMT -6
Stormpaw bit his lip as he tried to lower his tail and he straightened out his tail, though it looked somewhat awkward. He lowered his head and tensed every muscle he could. He looked a bit constipated.
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Post by Foxclaw on Oct 2, 2016 17:44:36 GMT -6
"good relax" he said calmly trying not to laugh.
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Post by Stormsong on Oct 3, 2016 18:52:57 GMT -6
Stormpaw tried to relax a bit, without slouching. It looked pretty decent, as his tail began to bend naturally again, and his muscles weren't as tight as they were before.
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Post by Foxclaw on Oct 3, 2016 19:22:00 GMT -6
"good, now take a sniff of air what do you smell" Foxclaw asked pacing about the white and grey tom.
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Post by Stormsong on Oct 4, 2016 5:17:36 GMT -6
Stormpaw took a sniff out of the air. "Uh... It kinda smells like rabbit. But kind of... Fresher?"
((how do you explain how something smells dead and something doesn't without outright saying it
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Post by Foxclaw on Oct 4, 2016 11:40:26 GMT -6
((ikr))
"can you tell which direction it's coming from?" He asked siting down.
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Post by Stormsong on Oct 4, 2016 16:13:09 GMT -6
Stormpaw gestured with his head to somewhere to his left. "That direction."
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Post by Foxclaw on Oct 4, 2016 19:00:02 GMT -6
"now creep towards it when you see the rabbit pounce." Foxclaw instructed him.
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Post by Stormsong on Oct 5, 2016 5:38:23 GMT -6
Stormpaw nodded and started to try quietly walking in the direction of the scent. As soon as he first caught the first glimpse of the rabbit, he dropped into a crouch. With his corrected crouch, his movements flowed better as he stalked up to it, before pouncing on it. Except he somehow managed to trip upon landing and the rabbit got away. He sighed.
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Post by Foxclaw on Oct 5, 2016 14:26:56 GMT -6
"good job you stalked it perfectly. When you pounce use just your hind legs to jump and thrust yourself toward with your front paws pointing to the prey. Try again" the tom purred.
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Post by Stormsong on Oct 8, 2016 8:55:50 GMT -6
Stormpaw watched Foxclaw come over and give some praise, some constructive criticism. He simply nodded. "Okay...." He shook himself out as he stood back on his paws. Then he sniffed the air and went search of another piece of prey. He was lucky enough to find another rabbit, and then he dropped back down into a crouch and carefully approached the furry creature. Then he remembered Foxclaw's advice acutely, then he pounced.
His claws almost slipped up, but he managed to kill it before it got away. Though the kill was a bit messy. He picked it up by its neck in his jaws. He looked around for Foxclaw.
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