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Post by Wildheart on Apr 10, 2009 9:18:18 GMT -6
IM WRITING A STORY! PLEASE READ IT!
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Post by Wildheart on Apr 10, 2009 9:21:02 GMT -6
midnight forest
chapter 1
I sat in the stone den around a group of eyes blinking with curiosity, waiting for me to begin my story, a story of my life in this clan, I’m Wildheart by the way and welcome to Ice Clan when I first started out in Ice Clan I was young and I was a loner-a cat that doesn’t have a clan and aren’t cared for by Twolegs – when I came across the clans I was intrigued by their life style, they seemed to have a purpose in life, a reason to live to the next day and the day after that.
I started to come there regularly then every day, I was so comfortable that I started to creep farther and farther into their territory, before I knew it I had gotten so far in the ‘Ice Clan’ territory that I was outside the camp wall, it was made out of thick bramble and ferns the entrance was very well hidden, it was a large opening in the wall covered in thick bramble and bracken leaving just enough space for a cat or two to squeeze out.
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Post by Wildheart on Apr 10, 2009 9:24:22 GMT -6
One day while I was watching the clan members hunt and patrol their borders a mouse scampered out from under a bush. I had watched the wild cats hunt these before and I was feeling a little hungry so a crouched down into a hunting position I had seen a wild cat do before while hunting a mouse, I crept lightly forward silently, when I was three tail lengths away from my prey I got ready to pounce, suddenly the bushes rustled and the mouse’s ears pricked, it shot out of the clearing where I stood and threw the undergrowth. I looked at the bush that had rustled a few seconds ago, I stepped forward sniffing the air trying to pick up a scent, a streak of light brown fur shot out and slammed me to the ground, shocked I looked up at the shape that had knocked me off my feet, solid green eyes stared back at me furious and
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Post by Wildheart on Apr 10, 2009 9:24:54 GMT -6
the thing-which turned out to be a cat-said “Why are you here!” a blank look spread across my face “I uh….well,” is all I could manage to say “Why are you in are territory! Loner get out now! Before I-“a deep voice sounded from behind the green eyed wild cat “Bramblepaw! Leave that young kit alone! It is clearly lost!” ‘Bramblepaw’ relisted my small body from the power of his huge paws “hum? We need more warriors and I saw how you stalked that mouse before you where interrupted,” the Deep voice was another cat, a sandy brown cat with broad, powerful shoulders “my name is Everbreeze, and this is Bramblepaw my apprentice, we were just out hunting and saw you in our territory, after watching you hunt I would like to take you back to our clan to see what our leader thinks” Everbreeze finished, Bramblepaw looked at me in a hostile manner that sent a shiver down my spine. “I would like to come with you” I bowed my head respectively as he got up and turned the way he had come; I followed him with Bramblepaw close behind.
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Post by Wildheart on Apr 10, 2009 9:25:20 GMT -6
It didn’t take us long to get to camp, the entrance was bigger than it seemed from where I watched the clan go about their daily schedule. Everbreeze lead the way through the entrance and Bramblepaw shot ahead of me, glaring at me and mumbling something under his breath, my fur prickled and fire shot through my paws, I tried to maintain my anger, I sighed heavily and followed him though entrance.
When I stepped out of the entrance there was a cleared space stretched out in front of me, there were a few wild cats outside, there where smaller dens that made up the camp and in the center of the camp there was a hallowed out tree, a sleek black cat stepped out of the hallow Everbreeze flicked his tail and she walked over, her eyes fixed on me a glint of curiosity showed in her pale green eyes “What is this?” she asked when she got close enough “I found her on our territory, she would have caught a mouse if Bramblepaw hadn’t scared it off” he explained, bowing his head in respect, she looked at him and nodded “I see “she flicked the tip of her tail in signal for Bramblepaw to go, when he was out of ear shot she said “My name is Wildstar and this is IceClan,” Wildstar looked around the clearing “I’m afraid I don’t have time to show you around, Everbreeze can assign someone to give you a tour of the camp.” She finished and walked off toward the hollowed tree. “I’ll go to the warrior’s den and find a warrior to tour you around the camp,” Everbreeze said shaking his head “stay here till I get back” he finished and trotted off toward one of the dens
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Post by Wildheart on Apr 10, 2009 9:25:58 GMT -6
I sat on the dusty ground and waited for Everbreeze to get back, as I waited l looked around the clearing, it seemed that very few cats knew that I was here, I saw a pile of dead animals a few fox lengths away from the Hollow Tree, they smelled delicious, my mouth was watering “Are you quite done now?” a high pitched voice sounded in the direction that Everbreeze had gone, I looked over to see who had said that and met eyes with a light brown she-kit about my age with stunning green eyes. I was dazzled by her almost stunned as she
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Post by Wildheart on Apr 10, 2009 9:26:40 GMT -6
laughed at me “My names Rockkit what’s yours?” I looked at her with a blank expression on my face, I never really had one “I don’t have one,” I told her “should I?” she looked shocked for a minute “of course you should! We all have names and you need one to!” paw steps sounded behind Rockkit “good news I found a warrior willing to take you on a tour of our camp” Everbreeze said now standing behind Rockkit “this is Silverstorm” he gestured to a light gray almost silver she-cat that stood at his side, she dipped her head in greeting “what is your name young kit?” the gray-silver she-cat asked “she don’t have one” Rockkit answered, they all looked at me “I-it’s true I never really had a use for a name because my mom died giving birth to me and never named me” I looked at my paws nervously hopefully they wouldn’t cast out a kit with no name “then I will get Wildstar to give you one” Everbreeze reassured me and walked away and Silverstorm mumbled something under her breath, she couldn’t want her gone to could she? But it wasn’t like what Bramblepaw had said earlier “shall we get going?” no trace of hostility was in her tone I nodded. I walked with my head down only looking up when Silverstorm said to look at something or we were at a den “this is where you’ll be sleeping to night” she said as I looked up at the small den in front of me “this is the nursery “she finished
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Post by Wildheart on Apr 10, 2009 9:28:50 GMT -6
Characters:
Wildkit, Rockkit, Wildstar
Clans: Ice Clan, Rock Clan, Tree Clan, Fire Clan
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Ravennight
Warrior
RockClan. She washed up on a distant shore after being outcast. She suffers flashbacks.
Posts: 277
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Post by Ravennight on Apr 10, 2009 9:29:09 GMT -6
(I've got deja vu!)
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Post by Wildheart on Apr 10, 2009 9:30:27 GMT -6
i should have written the characters first
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Post by Wildheart on Apr 10, 2009 9:30:50 GMT -6
(why?)
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Post by rockfire on Apr 10, 2009 9:31:23 GMT -6
hi.
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Post by Wildheart on Apr 10, 2009 9:31:52 GMT -6
(i think i did good what do you people think?)
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Ravennight
Warrior
RockClan. She washed up on a distant shore after being outcast. She suffers flashbacks.
Posts: 277
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Post by Ravennight on Apr 10, 2009 9:33:56 GMT -6
(I don't know why I have Deja vu. Could be names. Could be plot? You wouldn't want to here my story, its 18 pages long at the moment. I've got shorter stories about cats and such..)
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Post by Wildheart on Apr 10, 2009 9:34:30 GMT -6
your just cussing like crazy Rockfire
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