Iceclaw
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IceClan. Loves snow and ice. Has very sharp claws and teeth.[Mo0:0]
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Post by Iceclaw on Apr 10, 2009 11:32:23 GMT -6
(I thought Firestorm was a she-cat!)
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Post by Wildheart on Apr 10, 2009 11:40:08 GMT -6
is anyone there?
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Post by Wildheart on Apr 10, 2009 11:40:33 GMT -6
i don't know really
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Post by Wildheart on Apr 10, 2009 11:41:54 GMT -6
is Firestorm a she-cat? the questions of life
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Post by Wildheart on Apr 10, 2009 11:42:15 GMT -6
lol
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Post by Wildheart on Apr 10, 2009 11:42:57 GMT -6
do you like my story?  ?? |
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Iceclaw
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IceClan. Loves snow and ice. Has very sharp claws and teeth.[Mo0:0]
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Post by Iceclaw on Apr 10, 2009 11:48:46 GMT -6
Its good. But you probably won't get it published. Its very good. Check Firestorm's profile out.
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Post by Wildheart on Apr 10, 2009 11:55:20 GMT -6
yous needs tos bes mores postives
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Post by rockfire on Apr 10, 2009 12:56:27 GMT -6
lol
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Iceclaw
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IceClan. Loves snow and ice. Has very sharp claws and teeth.[Mo0:0]
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Post by Iceclaw on Apr 10, 2009 13:46:23 GMT -6
I am not very positive.
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Post by Wildheart on Apr 10, 2009 14:36:58 GMT -6
sucks to be you
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Iceclaw
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IceClan. Loves snow and ice. Has very sharp claws and teeth.[Mo0:0]
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Post by Iceclaw on Apr 11, 2009 0:03:05 GMT -6
If you think everythink is going to turn out bad, then something does turn out good. Its more of a surprise, and its feels better.
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Darkpelt
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hi how r u?[Mo0:14]
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Post by Darkpelt on Apr 11, 2009 7:14:37 GMT -6
Good start to your story Wildheart you have a talent for writing so far I like what yout writing!!
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Post by Brightclaw on Apr 13, 2009 10:38:58 GMT -6
(im wildheart) thanks blackflame!
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Post by Birchtail on Apr 14, 2009 17:45:14 GMT -6
I thought your story was good but use more periods and throw in some anecdotes and explain. Its a little hard to follow but it has a purpose so its pretty good!
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