Iguanakit
Apprentice
Reminds everyone of an iguana. Flicks his tongue out and crosses eyes.
Posts: 99
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Post by Iguanakit on Sept 19, 2010 16:18:16 GMT -6
HAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAH! Yea I like it!
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Post by Morningdew on Sept 19, 2010 17:08:03 GMT -6
Thanks^.^ Im planning on publishing it one day. Oh re-read chapter 3! I forgot to edit that part oopsies:/
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Post by Morningdew on Sept 21, 2010 21:56:30 GMT -6
Wow i guess no one cares about this, im writing another chapter if anyone does...It will probably be up tonight.
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Post by Sunblaze on Sept 22, 2010 4:20:42 GMT -6
 I sooo care, I love the story, and If it was a book, I would buy iiiiiit  |
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Post by Jac on Sept 22, 2010 10:17:22 GMT -6
T.T if you want to put it that way, nobody cares about my story since there isn't a single post on it.
- shuffles off to lunch -
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Post by Fernpelt on Sept 22, 2010 16:56:06 GMT -6
DO CHAPPY ELEVEN!
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Post by Morningdew on Sept 22, 2010 19:51:52 GMT -6
Aww thanks you guys^.^ Ok well Chapter 11 is on my computer at my mom's house, and i am at my dad's so i will do it tommorow night kk!<3333
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Post by Morningdew on Sept 23, 2010 18:29:12 GMT -6
CHAPTER 11 IS UP! Ok i want to end it there but any ideas about what should happen next cause im totally blanking out?
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Post by Fernpelt on Sept 23, 2010 19:43:42 GMT -6
I'm confused. You want to end it there but want ideas on what to happen next? Oh, and if you REALLY want this published, it would be a short story...right?
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Post by Morningdew on Sept 23, 2010 21:56:39 GMT -6
No i meant that i could end it there, but if someone gives me a good idea on what happens next that can make a long plot that would be great. I want it to have atleast 21 chapters so idk if i would call that a short story or not.
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Post by Fernpelt on Sept 24, 2010 21:18:53 GMT -6
WEll, 21 chapters is totally fine, not a short story. But the way it is now...well, it would probably take up 5 sheets on paper! xD I would suggest lots and LOTS of revisions, character development, and such things. We don't get enough time to REALLY get to know Bloom. By the end of the book I couldn't really recall her name until Chloe said it!
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Post by Morningdew on Sept 24, 2010 21:24:53 GMT -6
Yah well I printed it out and it took up like 10-15 sheets of paperXD I know i don't say her name a lot, but it is really hard with the dialogue to fit that in.
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Post by Fernpelt on Sept 24, 2010 21:33:43 GMT -6
I know, it's only your first time through, but if you do want to have it published and not be overwhelmed the first time your editor sends it back to you with little highlights everywhere, then I'd start making it the most PERFECTNESS as possible. I know it's not easy, my book needs working on, too. Wolfgang needs to be characterized more.
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Post by Morningdew on Sept 24, 2010 22:50:31 GMT -6
It's just soooo hard, I mean come on how detailed can you possibly be?
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Post by Fernpelt on Sept 25, 2010 0:06:19 GMT -6
xD Oh, I don't think you want that answer!!! Imagine being blind for your whole life and having someone describe something to you to make you understand it. EVERY SINGLE detail shoul be included, though my book leaves a bit to be desired...that was an understatement.
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