Posting a poem in the writing board!? NO WAY!

[lui]

Read slowly for maximum effect

creak,
he
stepped
forward
his eyes burned
blue
and I could feel the
anger
reeking off him.
he raised his
fist
but he never did
hit.

he was a
coward.

NO CRITICISM PLEASE, I'M RUSTY AND THIS WAS DONE QUICK.