Post by Dash on Sept 21, 2010 19:21:29 GMT -6
Critique and compliments only please! Thank you. I plan for this to be 90 something chapters long.
Chapter one,
The prologue
In the beginning of it all before the apocalyptic nightmare had begun many people had thought they would be fine. Being jolly and merry, until the new country Bensferd had been founded from the frozen ashes of Siberia. As the country took more of Asia it began spreading seaward. America had been too scared of the new threat to bother attacking it before it reached them, powerful as ever. America tried to fight back but soon discovered these cold hearts were cold hearted only because of their mutated appearance.The mutants found that they had lost more previously then thought and they were defeated mainly but they settled across a now apocalyptic and crumbling world. America had gone on living as usual in the central states but in the south, the east, the west, and the north the apocalypse had begun for America. The states next to the sea were affected the worst especially the becahed areas. Florida had been lucky enough to be the only state near the ocean to nearly win and they had minimal casualties. Most everyone was evacuated on time. But a few dim wits decided this was all fake and stayed. They were quickly torn to shreds literally by the oncoming hordes.
Chapter two,
The fifth day in Florida.
(Alex)
Alex Jedd had decided to stay to fend off the hordes. He and several others that is. They had grenades, M16s, colts, and whatever else they would happen across. They were stationed at Destin and had come after the main force had torn apart the civillians. They hadn't expected that on the first day they would mostly be killed. It wasn't that the mutants were near invincible, though some were, it was that the hordes were so enormous that you couldn't kill them all. They had run out of grenades quickly. Though most went to good use. At the moment he and his squad were holed up running low on ammo and conserving it for chargind mutants. Alex said to his friend,thomas, "It seems like they want to die when they run up to us." Alex smiled at his friend but when Thomas tried to smile back out came a small bit of blood. He was still recovering from internally bleeding from a mutant assasin whacking him with the side of his wrist blade in the stomach. Alex sighed and shook his head then fired out again at the mutants, who were relentlessly charging as if it was their destiny to kill Alex and his squad. Maybe it was just crucial to them.
An hour later it was sundown and Alex was searching for supplies with Thomas while Joe and Trek were back at camp. Suddenly when he turned a huge chunk of metal was swinging at him. When he ducked he noticed Thomas had gotten his face crushed in by the metal. When Thomas hit the ground he saw a Brute mutant who was preparing for another swing. Brutes had incredible strength and they were extremely resistant to most types of damage they were slow however. The best thing to do was run but Alex took out his knife and got ready for some quick fighting. He threw down his guns and, while angry at the beast for smashing his friend, charged at it. It swung downwards att him and he quickly rolled to the side then lunged and stabbed his arm. The beast swiped at him and got a good hit in causing him to roll on his side over to the carcass of his friend. He hated to do this but he took his friends knife and threw it into the Brute's eye. The Brute stumbled and Alex advanced with his own knife then plunged it into the Brute's head. The Brute fell and Alex slept ontop of the carcass because he didn't want to risk travelling again.
Chapter 3,
The mutant's lust.
(Captain Artsonian)
Artsonian had begun to warm up to humans for breakfast, dinner, and lunch. He hated when he had to eat his type's normal food at this point. He hoped after his side won, which he beleived was inevitable, he could get used to his old food. Artsonian was a blade mutant. Similar to the Mutant assasins but the blades sticking out of their wrists could morph. Though they weren't as stealthy as Mutant Assasins they were faster and stronger. Mutant Assasins did have sharp teeth which the blades did not. But the blades had much better skill with their wrist multi-swords. The blades were essentially more all out and frontal.
Artsonian was in South Carolina and he was walking toward the border between the new state, which was a central one, west North Carolina. As Artsonian reached the border he saw several mutant grunts charging and slashing at guards with their claws. A heavy squad was guarding the border and using their S.A.W.s to shoot down several of the grunts. They had new and heavily padded armor. Artsonian walked through the crowd cutting down any grunt that dare not move out of his way then he morphed his blades into long katanas and plunged his directly through the guard's stomach then lifted him by the wrist blade and pulled him off with his hand, then holding the guard by the neck he squeezed until he heard the windpipe snap. While the guard was gasping, but no sound could escape and soon he turned purple, then began growing pale. He threw the body back and, ignoring the protests of the bullets whizzing past him and into the grunts around him, he walked away.
Chapter 4
The end of the prologue.
(Narration.)
The humans had a bad turn when the West North Carolina Border was destroyed. But the other borders were reinforced greatly. The humans sent an invasion force to attack West North Carolina. Meanwhile a mysterious new force landed in Florida. The squad stationed in Destin should be given a full frontal of it. The mutants recieved a great bonus from this.
Chapter 5
The tale begins.
(Alex.)
Alex awoke and there was several packs of ammo around him and he heard gunfire all around and marching. He noticed the ammo packs had been dropped on purpose and he picked them up. He loaded his gun again and then he moved out. He turned a corner and one of his squadmates was under heavy fire by troops appearing to be African. He fired at several of the troops and took them down but he saw a jet dropping bombs. He asked his ally what was happening but suddenly he saw ten American soldiers running up the streets backwards and shooting down grunts. A sniper in a building took out one of the Americans and Alex shot the sniper with good lined up sights. When a group of soldiers busted through the door to a building and began firing a new American soldier blew the group up with a grenade then she herself was shot. Alex took the advantage of a break in the fire where they were to yell over the bombs and shells at his squadmate to tell him what was going on. His squadmate yelled back "We're in a crisis situation I think Central sent reinforcements but we're under attack by the African army. I think their siding with the mutants!" Alex sighed and reloaded his gun then charged down the street through a hail of blood and bombs. Suddenly a mutant assasin grabbed him and he turned and hit at the assasin with his gun but the Assasin did a backflip seeming to move like he was one of the bullets whizzing around. The Assasin stabbed Alex in the arm and Alex shouted a curse then stabbed the assasin with his knife in the arm. While the Assasin was recovering he kicked him down and shot him in the head with a burst of fury. Alex ran down the street again occasionally having to get into a firefight or fight a few mutants. Eventually he exited through the ruined but now reinforced with soldiers. Alex decided to leave for the central states, he'd have to cross through South Carolina and North Carolina while having the marching army on his tail though.
Chapter 6
The mutant's first defeat.
(Artsonian.)
Artsonian morphed one of his wrist blades into a knife and began sharpening a stick he was holding. When he was done he walked to a human prisoner and stabbed it into the prisoner's eye then asked him where the supplies were held. When Artsonian realized the human wasn't going to talk he stabbed him in the stomach with the stick then whipped him across the face with his knife and finally said "Drown him." They then proceeded and did so in the water they never drank. Their only drink was blood. But their wine was royal blood. Artsonian changed his wrist blades into his featured long katanas and walked to the human base an army of grunts and other blades following him. Several African soldiers who came from the east coast marched by the sides of the road to flank the human base town. The mutant camp was shabby and on a lake but the human base was a comfy town that has been defended well. When they reached the base the African soldiers began firing and throwing grenades whereas the humans took shelter in windows and popped out to fire occasionally. Artsonian jumped up onto roofs and through windows. He was cutting down any humans who wouldn't run, or were to slow, which meant anyone who he saw that was human he killed. But his allies were being driven back by the humans so he decided to cover their retreat by using a turret set up and he began shooting down Americans. He took out several snipers and some machinegunners. Then he focused on taking out ground troops. He was able to wipe half of them out before the turret ran out of ammo and he jumped down and cut down the rest of the grounded Americans. Then he left with the rest. This had been their first major defeat.
Chapter 7
The one man war.
(Alex.)
Alex readied his M16 and bought some more ammo from a neutral mutant. He then took place in an old farm, knowing some of the passing army might investigate the farm. And sure enough the Bad Company of Africa came and investigated the farm. As they climbed the ladder to his perch he sank down and checked his M16. Seeing no flaws he fired directly into an enemy's kneecap causing him to buckle and lean off the edge. He fell and hit the ground, the impact making a sickening crunch. He shot the next oncoming one in the head which caused him to fall through a window next to him. The other eighteen Africans in the Bad Company left and ran down the road.About a mile off he heard tanks and very loud marching. He thought there must be at least twenty thousand tanks and two million men and women. As they got closer he hoped the Bad Company hadn't mentioned the building he was in. But when they came by the line stopped and ten tanks turned their aim to the building he was in and several snipers used scopes and looked for him. They didn't find him but they sent an advance party and suddenly he stood up and began shooting Africans down. One of them got shot in the eye and she fell off the ladder she was climbing into another climber so they both fell and died. Alex shot more of the Africans coming in then took cover from the snipers and reloaded. While he was reloading a tank shot at the building and caused it to fall in on itself. In the dust Alex ran and began aiming back at the pile of ruined bricks and dirt. Though no more of the Africans followed him and they continued on. Soon after he followed behind them.
While the Africans were encamped at night Alex took out sentries then stole their M16 ammo and got two swords. He then took a tank and began piloting it. As he left Africans awoke and they sent tanks after him and set up RPGs along the road to South Carolina. So while he was heading toward the state border to South Carolina he had to take out several other tanks and RPGs. Although having a tank himself made it easier. At the border he abandoned the now severely damaged tank and continued on foot.
Chapter 8
The backstabbers.
(Artsonian.)
Artsonian was speaking with his commander and suddenly he changed a wrist blade into a very long blade with an extra grip and he grabbed the extra grip with his other hand then he moved out. He had been given his orders.
Artsonian's hair was blowing long with the wind and he had his ceremonial black trenchcoat on. He walked up to the door of the major African base they had built after the few years they had been here secretely. The door was a ruined wall of stone and he entered. But when he got in he decapitated the first guard he saw. When another shot at him he whipped the bullet with his blade and it bounced around the room and through several guards making him fall down, gasping for air. Atsonian broke down a door with his blade then he slashed several guards that were waiting in half and then mutants who didn't know what was going on charged at him, so he complied by cutting down every one of them apetheticly. He looked for the leader but he wasn't there. So he simply left, angry with himself for failing.
Chapter 9
The master of the blade.
(Alex.)
Chapter one,
The prologue
In the beginning of it all before the apocalyptic nightmare had begun many people had thought they would be fine. Being jolly and merry, until the new country Bensferd had been founded from the frozen ashes of Siberia. As the country took more of Asia it began spreading seaward. America had been too scared of the new threat to bother attacking it before it reached them, powerful as ever. America tried to fight back but soon discovered these cold hearts were cold hearted only because of their mutated appearance.The mutants found that they had lost more previously then thought and they were defeated mainly but they settled across a now apocalyptic and crumbling world. America had gone on living as usual in the central states but in the south, the east, the west, and the north the apocalypse had begun for America. The states next to the sea were affected the worst especially the becahed areas. Florida had been lucky enough to be the only state near the ocean to nearly win and they had minimal casualties. Most everyone was evacuated on time. But a few dim wits decided this was all fake and stayed. They were quickly torn to shreds literally by the oncoming hordes.
Chapter two,
The fifth day in Florida.
(Alex)
Alex Jedd had decided to stay to fend off the hordes. He and several others that is. They had grenades, M16s, colts, and whatever else they would happen across. They were stationed at Destin and had come after the main force had torn apart the civillians. They hadn't expected that on the first day they would mostly be killed. It wasn't that the mutants were near invincible, though some were, it was that the hordes were so enormous that you couldn't kill them all. They had run out of grenades quickly. Though most went to good use. At the moment he and his squad were holed up running low on ammo and conserving it for chargind mutants. Alex said to his friend,thomas, "It seems like they want to die when they run up to us." Alex smiled at his friend but when Thomas tried to smile back out came a small bit of blood. He was still recovering from internally bleeding from a mutant assasin whacking him with the side of his wrist blade in the stomach. Alex sighed and shook his head then fired out again at the mutants, who were relentlessly charging as if it was their destiny to kill Alex and his squad. Maybe it was just crucial to them.
An hour later it was sundown and Alex was searching for supplies with Thomas while Joe and Trek were back at camp. Suddenly when he turned a huge chunk of metal was swinging at him. When he ducked he noticed Thomas had gotten his face crushed in by the metal. When Thomas hit the ground he saw a Brute mutant who was preparing for another swing. Brutes had incredible strength and they were extremely resistant to most types of damage they were slow however. The best thing to do was run but Alex took out his knife and got ready for some quick fighting. He threw down his guns and, while angry at the beast for smashing his friend, charged at it. It swung downwards att him and he quickly rolled to the side then lunged and stabbed his arm. The beast swiped at him and got a good hit in causing him to roll on his side over to the carcass of his friend. He hated to do this but he took his friends knife and threw it into the Brute's eye. The Brute stumbled and Alex advanced with his own knife then plunged it into the Brute's head. The Brute fell and Alex slept ontop of the carcass because he didn't want to risk travelling again.
Chapter 3,
The mutant's lust.
(Captain Artsonian)
Artsonian had begun to warm up to humans for breakfast, dinner, and lunch. He hated when he had to eat his type's normal food at this point. He hoped after his side won, which he beleived was inevitable, he could get used to his old food. Artsonian was a blade mutant. Similar to the Mutant assasins but the blades sticking out of their wrists could morph. Though they weren't as stealthy as Mutant Assasins they were faster and stronger. Mutant Assasins did have sharp teeth which the blades did not. But the blades had much better skill with their wrist multi-swords. The blades were essentially more all out and frontal.
Artsonian was in South Carolina and he was walking toward the border between the new state, which was a central one, west North Carolina. As Artsonian reached the border he saw several mutant grunts charging and slashing at guards with their claws. A heavy squad was guarding the border and using their S.A.W.s to shoot down several of the grunts. They had new and heavily padded armor. Artsonian walked through the crowd cutting down any grunt that dare not move out of his way then he morphed his blades into long katanas and plunged his directly through the guard's stomach then lifted him by the wrist blade and pulled him off with his hand, then holding the guard by the neck he squeezed until he heard the windpipe snap. While the guard was gasping, but no sound could escape and soon he turned purple, then began growing pale. He threw the body back and, ignoring the protests of the bullets whizzing past him and into the grunts around him, he walked away.
Chapter 4
The end of the prologue.
(Narration.)
The humans had a bad turn when the West North Carolina Border was destroyed. But the other borders were reinforced greatly. The humans sent an invasion force to attack West North Carolina. Meanwhile a mysterious new force landed in Florida. The squad stationed in Destin should be given a full frontal of it. The mutants recieved a great bonus from this.
Chapter 5
The tale begins.
(Alex.)
Alex awoke and there was several packs of ammo around him and he heard gunfire all around and marching. He noticed the ammo packs had been dropped on purpose and he picked them up. He loaded his gun again and then he moved out. He turned a corner and one of his squadmates was under heavy fire by troops appearing to be African. He fired at several of the troops and took them down but he saw a jet dropping bombs. He asked his ally what was happening but suddenly he saw ten American soldiers running up the streets backwards and shooting down grunts. A sniper in a building took out one of the Americans and Alex shot the sniper with good lined up sights. When a group of soldiers busted through the door to a building and began firing a new American soldier blew the group up with a grenade then she herself was shot. Alex took the advantage of a break in the fire where they were to yell over the bombs and shells at his squadmate to tell him what was going on. His squadmate yelled back "We're in a crisis situation I think Central sent reinforcements but we're under attack by the African army. I think their siding with the mutants!" Alex sighed and reloaded his gun then charged down the street through a hail of blood and bombs. Suddenly a mutant assasin grabbed him and he turned and hit at the assasin with his gun but the Assasin did a backflip seeming to move like he was one of the bullets whizzing around. The Assasin stabbed Alex in the arm and Alex shouted a curse then stabbed the assasin with his knife in the arm. While the Assasin was recovering he kicked him down and shot him in the head with a burst of fury. Alex ran down the street again occasionally having to get into a firefight or fight a few mutants. Eventually he exited through the ruined but now reinforced with soldiers. Alex decided to leave for the central states, he'd have to cross through South Carolina and North Carolina while having the marching army on his tail though.
Chapter 6
The mutant's first defeat.
(Artsonian.)
Artsonian morphed one of his wrist blades into a knife and began sharpening a stick he was holding. When he was done he walked to a human prisoner and stabbed it into the prisoner's eye then asked him where the supplies were held. When Artsonian realized the human wasn't going to talk he stabbed him in the stomach with the stick then whipped him across the face with his knife and finally said "Drown him." They then proceeded and did so in the water they never drank. Their only drink was blood. But their wine was royal blood. Artsonian changed his wrist blades into his featured long katanas and walked to the human base an army of grunts and other blades following him. Several African soldiers who came from the east coast marched by the sides of the road to flank the human base town. The mutant camp was shabby and on a lake but the human base was a comfy town that has been defended well. When they reached the base the African soldiers began firing and throwing grenades whereas the humans took shelter in windows and popped out to fire occasionally. Artsonian jumped up onto roofs and through windows. He was cutting down any humans who wouldn't run, or were to slow, which meant anyone who he saw that was human he killed. But his allies were being driven back by the humans so he decided to cover their retreat by using a turret set up and he began shooting down Americans. He took out several snipers and some machinegunners. Then he focused on taking out ground troops. He was able to wipe half of them out before the turret ran out of ammo and he jumped down and cut down the rest of the grounded Americans. Then he left with the rest. This had been their first major defeat.
Chapter 7
The one man war.
(Alex.)
Alex readied his M16 and bought some more ammo from a neutral mutant. He then took place in an old farm, knowing some of the passing army might investigate the farm. And sure enough the Bad Company of Africa came and investigated the farm. As they climbed the ladder to his perch he sank down and checked his M16. Seeing no flaws he fired directly into an enemy's kneecap causing him to buckle and lean off the edge. He fell and hit the ground, the impact making a sickening crunch. He shot the next oncoming one in the head which caused him to fall through a window next to him. The other eighteen Africans in the Bad Company left and ran down the road.About a mile off he heard tanks and very loud marching. He thought there must be at least twenty thousand tanks and two million men and women. As they got closer he hoped the Bad Company hadn't mentioned the building he was in. But when they came by the line stopped and ten tanks turned their aim to the building he was in and several snipers used scopes and looked for him. They didn't find him but they sent an advance party and suddenly he stood up and began shooting Africans down. One of them got shot in the eye and she fell off the ladder she was climbing into another climber so they both fell and died. Alex shot more of the Africans coming in then took cover from the snipers and reloaded. While he was reloading a tank shot at the building and caused it to fall in on itself. In the dust Alex ran and began aiming back at the pile of ruined bricks and dirt. Though no more of the Africans followed him and they continued on. Soon after he followed behind them.
While the Africans were encamped at night Alex took out sentries then stole their M16 ammo and got two swords. He then took a tank and began piloting it. As he left Africans awoke and they sent tanks after him and set up RPGs along the road to South Carolina. So while he was heading toward the state border to South Carolina he had to take out several other tanks and RPGs. Although having a tank himself made it easier. At the border he abandoned the now severely damaged tank and continued on foot.
Chapter 8
The backstabbers.
(Artsonian.)
Artsonian was speaking with his commander and suddenly he changed a wrist blade into a very long blade with an extra grip and he grabbed the extra grip with his other hand then he moved out. He had been given his orders.
Artsonian's hair was blowing long with the wind and he had his ceremonial black trenchcoat on. He walked up to the door of the major African base they had built after the few years they had been here secretely. The door was a ruined wall of stone and he entered. But when he got in he decapitated the first guard he saw. When another shot at him he whipped the bullet with his blade and it bounced around the room and through several guards making him fall down, gasping for air. Atsonian broke down a door with his blade then he slashed several guards that were waiting in half and then mutants who didn't know what was going on charged at him, so he complied by cutting down every one of them apetheticly. He looked for the leader but he wasn't there. So he simply left, angry with himself for failing.
Chapter 9
The master of the blade.
(Alex.)
. All-in-all, it was good; a 6/10 at the very least.