Chemicalsong
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"Everybody's youth is a dream, a form of chemical madness."[Mo0:0]
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Post by Chemicalsong on Nov 28, 2010 2:39:13 GMT -6
Okay I know I am not the best drawer/painter out there, but hey I am trying to improve. I am only posting one of my paintings at the moment. If you do want a request just Pm me.  I know I know its making ur eyes fall out of thier sockets |
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Deerfur
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Post by Deerfur on Nov 28, 2010 21:46:47 GMT -6
Nose isn't so great............. I can't exactly tell what the red and yellow thing is.... I think its a bomb.........
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Post by Ivycloud on Nov 29, 2010 16:44:51 GMT -6
Nose needs work. Hair does not burst out in different directions, it falls. It would not have spaces between the face in hair. Try to get a curve, its choppy, mainly on the face. Hair needs more work. And whats the yellow and red thing?
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Post by dogkit on Nov 29, 2010 17:22:57 GMT -6
The eyes are okay ... The nose and mouth is crooked and pointed.
The hair is sort of in the air, as if it were frizzy and messy. Try to make in fall straight and your hair would be a definate eight or seven. The highlights of the hair is sort of bland. Prehaps you should try blending the yellow highlights? I have hair something like that. Only blonde with natural brown highlights, my hair soft and straight, too.
Is that red thing possibly a flashlight? |
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Chemicalsong
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"Everybody's youth is a dream, a form of chemical madness."[Mo0:0]
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Post by Chemicalsong on Dec 3, 2010 21:41:05 GMT -6
ish it is a flashlight
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Post by Swiftwish on Dec 4, 2010 7:42:47 GMT -6
I like the eyes, But the hair would need some work and the nose looks quite pointy and the mouse looks crooked
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