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Post by Redstorm on Dec 1, 2010 10:17:53 GMT -6
I would really love to join this club, i love to write, even if i dont have to for school, i like writing mainly about wolves,warriors but sometimes i do crazy fantasies
Heres a little example of a wolf story of mine:
Leo turned his head around to look at the Wolf pup behind him whining. "what do you want?" he grumbled, Leo wasn't a young wolf, he was almost nine years old and he was known to be territorial.
The pup lowered his head in respect and slightly in fear. "m-my mother, shes hurt."
Leo groaned. "that's all anyone comes to me for." he padded over to the wolf pup and raised her head with a paw. "where is she?"
She stood up straighter now. "the twisted tree. she was shot by a hunter."
Leo started padding off towards a forest known as The Twisted Trees, which was appropriate since the trees were all twisted at the trunks and their branches didn't arch above the wolves head,s they went towards the ground. he pointed his ears forwards and held his tail straight, a sign of aggression, he could only hope hunters, or the rouge wolves of the twisted trees would take it seriously.
usually my paragraphs are longer but since I'm still sorta tired i cant think of much.
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Post by Procter on Dec 2, 2010 16:50:48 GMT -6
I for one vote for you to be 'elgiable' for this group. Although it dosn't really matter anyone can join.
But how come you dont put the effort and good writing like this into every post you make?D: It honestly is pretty good.
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Post by greycloud on Dec 2, 2010 17:29:51 GMT -6
redstorm~ thanks frosty and mainly ebcause i never like writing alot unless the thread is required to have a certain amount of words/sentences or its some battle/big hunt. but i do like writing with detail in my fighting and my cats personalities always show.
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Post by Procter on Dec 2, 2010 17:53:30 GMT -6
Like what i used to do is i couldn't find enough thing to write about. And it just got boring rambling or something. But i really try know to get better and make longer/better posts although I still suck at itx3
And in battles and such its just always fun: D
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Post by Badger on Dec 2, 2010 19:50:31 GMT -6
arent they?! i love roleplaying my cats fighting espicially when im fightign my other accoutns and i cna powerplay *sighs in happiness* fun times..
now im gonna write a story
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Post by Morningdew on Dec 4, 2010 22:31:00 GMT -6
There honestly is a few errors such as spelling and grammar, but realisticly it is very good! I'm in no place to judge your work or anything but with a few tweaks you definetly have potential, keep writing:)
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Post by Redstorm on Dec 6, 2010 10:32:59 GMT -6
thanks morningdew ya that little thingy there was lazy,boring and i cant think of why i would want to write any more about it but still, it brings me happiness ic ould think of that in less then five minutes
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