Post by Badger on Dec 2, 2010 20:24:31 GMT -6
Brief description: this story is really about a wolf named grizzer (got the name idea from wolf center 
) who isn't truly evil but sometimes..well read to find out...
Chapter 1; opening my eyes
When my light brown eyes opened for the first time i was scared. I knew the world wasn't really just blackness but when I took his first glimpse of the den I had been staying in the last three weeks I closed my eyes again. 'To many colors and lights!' I thought grumpily. Slowly i started to open my eyes again. This time it wasn't to bad and i saw my mother and siblings.
My mother was a lovely brown and grey female with blue eye's and a white chest and belly. She was very lither and her paws looked quite big. The main mark of a Breeze pack wolf. I then looked at my two siblings. The girl, a grey,brown and black wolf, was also very lither but her paws seemed smaller. I didn't bother wondering why so i took a look at my brother. He was fully black with one fading white paw and i noticed his eyes were midnight blue. He was big in the shoulder and legs and his ears were wide.
I then looked down at my own paws, small and grey. I then looked at my tail, greyish brown with a hint of black. 'huh, i have a mix of my mother's and my father's fur.' i thought.
Chapter 2; when my blood turned black.
A few weeks later, after my and my siblings ears went up, we were allowed to leave the den. I loved it, alot of the place around the den was white and slippery, my mother told us it was ice and to watch where we step.
I sniffed and immediately smiled, i could smell squirrel. I ha donly smelled it once before when my father brought it for my mother to eat for herself. I trotted forwards towards the scent and before i saw it i head the clicking sound of it biting an acorn. I started stalking forwards then pounced, but something strange happened when i pounced. I saw my paws turn darker and inside me i felt my heart race and i still believe to this day that my eyes turned red, but you know, i couldn't see them myself.
All i remember after that is trotting back home with the squirrel in my jaws and my mother screaming at me and nipping my ear. I'm not really sure why, i mean my brother and sister had been cheering at me with wagging tails. I just ignored it and figured that i shouldn't have gone that far from home.
Chapter 3; Scarlet pools form around me.
After another month or so I had been told to stay in the den or right outside of it. I got bored and took a hobby to counting how many times i saw a squirrel. I guess i did that because i did love the taste of them.
But after a month my mother told me that we had to leave, she had come back form hunting with a gash on her flank, and when i asked her what had happened she just said hunting accident. Neither I, me, Dark, my brother, or Mary, my sister, argued and just went along with what mother said. But none of us were prepared ot what happened next.
My mother gave us no time to prepare to leave, we left immediately. But not long after we left the den my mother shoved me and Dark into a bush. She made the tail signal that told us to be quiet. I understood after the conversation. I managed to see a White male wolf stalk out of some tall grass. "Bell, I'm aware you had your pups, any males?" I wondered why that mattered but stayed silent and kept hiding, listening to my mothers answer. "no, just my girl, i had another girl but she died from sickness." i heard her make a choking sound as she spoke the last part and was confused, i glanced at Dark but he shrugged. the white wolf spoke again. "I see, well I hope your trip to the Summer den works out OK."
My mother quickly got me and Dark out of the bushes and looked at me and my siblings sternly. "if you ever see an adult come by our new den while I'm not there, i want you to hide, never talk to the-" she never got to finish though because as she was talking she fell over, dead. Me and dark yelped and Mary let out a loud shriek as we saw the white male stalk forwards, we saw the gashed on the back of mothers neck and he had a look of pure evil on his face.
That's when it happened again, my fur turned darker, my ehart raced and again i felt like i could feel my eyes turn red. I pounced forwards, i didn't even know why and clawed his shoulder, he was to shocked at my transformation to react, i kept clawing him and clawing him and Finlay bit down on his life pumping artery in his neck, i bit down harder and harder until he to, fell over dead. I turned back and looked at my siblings. "leave, quickly, i dint want to hurt you to." i could feel my paws itching to pounce forwards and it took all my will-power not to.
Finlay they ran off and hid in some bushes, after that i just remember my fur turning lighter and my feelings to kill leave me before i passed out, and then i remember hearing my sisters voice calling my name and hearing dark tell her that he was going to check on mother.
PHEW!!!!! that took FOREVER!! and to think it was coming to me as i was writing XD
if you couldn't guess Grizzer has this little power to transform into a little beast whenever he feels he wants to kill something, like how he wanted to kill the squirrel or kill the white male (who by the way was the breeze pack alpha male)
) who isn't truly evil but sometimes..well read to find out...Chapter 1; opening my eyes
When my light brown eyes opened for the first time i was scared. I knew the world wasn't really just blackness but when I took his first glimpse of the den I had been staying in the last three weeks I closed my eyes again. 'To many colors and lights!' I thought grumpily. Slowly i started to open my eyes again. This time it wasn't to bad and i saw my mother and siblings.
My mother was a lovely brown and grey female with blue eye's and a white chest and belly. She was very lither and her paws looked quite big. The main mark of a Breeze pack wolf. I then looked at my two siblings. The girl, a grey,brown and black wolf, was also very lither but her paws seemed smaller. I didn't bother wondering why so i took a look at my brother. He was fully black with one fading white paw and i noticed his eyes were midnight blue. He was big in the shoulder and legs and his ears were wide.
I then looked down at my own paws, small and grey. I then looked at my tail, greyish brown with a hint of black. 'huh, i have a mix of my mother's and my father's fur.' i thought.
Chapter 2; when my blood turned black.
A few weeks later, after my and my siblings ears went up, we were allowed to leave the den. I loved it, alot of the place around the den was white and slippery, my mother told us it was ice and to watch where we step.
I sniffed and immediately smiled, i could smell squirrel. I ha donly smelled it once before when my father brought it for my mother to eat for herself. I trotted forwards towards the scent and before i saw it i head the clicking sound of it biting an acorn. I started stalking forwards then pounced, but something strange happened when i pounced. I saw my paws turn darker and inside me i felt my heart race and i still believe to this day that my eyes turned red, but you know, i couldn't see them myself.
All i remember after that is trotting back home with the squirrel in my jaws and my mother screaming at me and nipping my ear. I'm not really sure why, i mean my brother and sister had been cheering at me with wagging tails. I just ignored it and figured that i shouldn't have gone that far from home.
Chapter 3; Scarlet pools form around me.
After another month or so I had been told to stay in the den or right outside of it. I got bored and took a hobby to counting how many times i saw a squirrel. I guess i did that because i did love the taste of them.
But after a month my mother told me that we had to leave, she had come back form hunting with a gash on her flank, and when i asked her what had happened she just said hunting accident. Neither I, me, Dark, my brother, or Mary, my sister, argued and just went along with what mother said. But none of us were prepared ot what happened next.
My mother gave us no time to prepare to leave, we left immediately. But not long after we left the den my mother shoved me and Dark into a bush. She made the tail signal that told us to be quiet. I understood after the conversation. I managed to see a White male wolf stalk out of some tall grass. "Bell, I'm aware you had your pups, any males?" I wondered why that mattered but stayed silent and kept hiding, listening to my mothers answer. "no, just my girl, i had another girl but she died from sickness." i heard her make a choking sound as she spoke the last part and was confused, i glanced at Dark but he shrugged. the white wolf spoke again. "I see, well I hope your trip to the Summer den works out OK."
My mother quickly got me and Dark out of the bushes and looked at me and my siblings sternly. "if you ever see an adult come by our new den while I'm not there, i want you to hide, never talk to the-" she never got to finish though because as she was talking she fell over, dead. Me and dark yelped and Mary let out a loud shriek as we saw the white male stalk forwards, we saw the gashed on the back of mothers neck and he had a look of pure evil on his face.
That's when it happened again, my fur turned darker, my ehart raced and again i felt like i could feel my eyes turn red. I pounced forwards, i didn't even know why and clawed his shoulder, he was to shocked at my transformation to react, i kept clawing him and clawing him and Finlay bit down on his life pumping artery in his neck, i bit down harder and harder until he to, fell over dead. I turned back and looked at my siblings. "leave, quickly, i dint want to hurt you to." i could feel my paws itching to pounce forwards and it took all my will-power not to.
Finlay they ran off and hid in some bushes, after that i just remember my fur turning lighter and my feelings to kill leave me before i passed out, and then i remember hearing my sisters voice calling my name and hearing dark tell her that he was going to check on mother.
PHEW!!!!! that took FOREVER!! and to think it was coming to me as i was writing XD
if you couldn't guess Grizzer has this little power to transform into a little beast whenever he feels he wants to kill something, like how he wanted to kill the squirrel or kill the white male (who by the way was the breeze pack alpha male)
