Deerfur
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" Let your heart lead you every step of the way!!!!" ~ Deerfur
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Post by Deerfur on Dec 4, 2010 11:28:38 GMT -6
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Post by Tigerkit on Dec 4, 2010 14:57:55 GMT -6
Okay, the eyes are too 'round' and their isn't any iris. The chin, needs to be more out, unless you have a very round face. Then, the nose kinda looks like a 1/3 of a triangle. The neck needs to be a little more narrow and not so big, the hair needs to be more stringy . . shading and there needs to be some tones and shines in the hair and skin, the shirt could be less tight looking and more lose and waving like. And then you forgot the eyebrows ^^
I hope this helps, no offensive or hurt feelings was ment, a simply criticism from Autumnfall . . :3 ~ !
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Deerfur
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" Let your heart lead you every step of the way!!!!" ~ Deerfur
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Post by Deerfur on Dec 5, 2010 14:24:24 GMT -6
O DANG IT! I can't believe I forgot the eye brows. But I purposely did the eyes like that and I do have a round face but not THAT round. I didn't need shading for the fact that i did this on Photobucket. I do agree with the rounded face though and the stringy hair.
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Robbin
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Post by Robbin on Dec 5, 2010 20:42:03 GMT -6
Your hair's not /that/ dark Maggie. . . XD It's good considering its on Photobucket. Can you do meeee? You obviously know what I look like! But;;
Name: Cassidy (You dare put Cassidillian and you die a painful life) Hair: Brownish-ness (You should know) Skin tone: Slightly lighter than your pic's (You Know!) Eyes: Brown (No Dur) Shirt Color: ZOMG! ETTS GOT TO BE PURPLE! (Cause I'm wearing PURPLE!) Sleeve length(long short medium): Shortish Design on shirt: Collar and button down :'D Blushing (yes or no): Yush How dark of blush? 2 or 3, kinda light
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