Post by Whitefire on Dec 16, 2010 13:06:20 GMT -6
I love to write. Please tell me if this is good cause I want this to start as a series of mine.
Evil Whispers
Prologue
Whispers. About me. I tuned around and two red eyes glared at me. I froze. I wanted to run but I couldn't turn away from the whispers. They were soothing, gentle. But something wasn't right. They were bad. "No. Please don't do this to me!" I cried out frightened. Cat's eyes stared at me. I closed my own. I could heaar voices in the background. I woke up gasping. "Breakfast!! Taylor, come down here!!" My mother called. I let out a sigh of relief and climbed out of bed. I got dressed slowly. A vision slowly entered my head. 'Stay where you are. Don't go anywhere......' The red eyes returned. The vision faded. I pulled on my pants and shirt quickly. I brushed my hair and teeth quickly. I ran downstairs. "There you are. Your pancakes were going to get cold." My mother gently chided.
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Is that good enough? Cause it's a fantasy novel about vampires/romance.
Evil Whispers
Prologue
Whispers. About me. I tuned around and two red eyes glared at me. I froze. I wanted to run but I couldn't turn away from the whispers. They were soothing, gentle. But something wasn't right. They were bad. "No. Please don't do this to me!" I cried out frightened. Cat's eyes stared at me. I closed my own. I could heaar voices in the background. I woke up gasping. "Breakfast!! Taylor, come down here!!" My mother called. I let out a sigh of relief and climbed out of bed. I got dressed slowly. A vision slowly entered my head. 'Stay where you are. Don't go anywhere......' The red eyes returned. The vision faded. I pulled on my pants and shirt quickly. I brushed my hair and teeth quickly. I ran downstairs. "There you are. Your pancakes were going to get cold." My mother gently chided.
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Is that good enough? Cause it's a fantasy novel about vampires/romance.
