Does He Know (poem B3)

[Prairiemist]

Hey, so er... I dont know if I have to ask to join first before I post this...but..yah. Could I join? anyway, this is a poem I thought about 10 minutes ago (dedicated to somebody XD) and decided to type up. So...what do 'ya think?

Does He Know

I don’t think I ever told him
So I always wondered,
Does he know?

Does he know that every time I talk to him,
I feel my heart flying in the clouds?
That every time I see his name glowing in the darkness,
I wish I could reach my hand out to his?

I don’t think I ever told him
So I always wondered,
Does he know?

Does he know that I lay awake at night,
And picture his smiling face?
That when I’m with others,
I find myself thinking of him?

I don’t think I ever told him
So I always wondered,
Does he know?

Does he know that when I feel alone,
I can almost feel his arms wrapping around me in embrace?
That every second we spend together,
Is as precious to me as nothing else?

I don’t think I ever told him
So I always wondered,
Does he know?

Does he know that I’m afraid to love any one
But if I had the strength..
The bravery...
To love a person,
He would be the only one I could love

I don’t think I ever told him
So I always wondered,
Does he know?[/center]

[Swiftwish]

Its good ^^

From a poet's view I give it 7/10

[Prairiemist]

Thanks =) , so what could I do to improve?

[Swiftbite]

Its good at an aouthors view 6.5/10

[Prairiemist]

Thanks again =) any advice though?

[Lucius Rose]

10/10
I am hooked on that poem!