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Post by tanzainitekit on Jan 14, 2011 16:38:16 GMT -6
The rouge Kit stumped into the nursery, tanzanite mewled around. She had been abandoned and stumbled her way here. She was skinny and beaten, a scar over her closed eye, it hadn't caused her to be blind, but she wouldn't know until she could open her eyes. She collapsed and yowled a little kit yowl.
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Post by Koisplash on Jan 14, 2011 17:06:38 GMT -6
(Tanzanitekit, there are 3 problems with this:
1. If you're a rogue kit, how did you get in here???
2. If you want to be in TreeClan, you are NOT abandoned, you have NOT been beaten, you are a kit of either Harrowingpride, Leopardfire, or Oakspirit, and by blood, not adopted.
3. Cats do not know what tanzanite is. Plus, if you want to be a rogue, your name does not include anything like "kit" at the end of it.)
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Post by Tinydapple on Jan 15, 2011 12:45:33 GMT -6
that is true very true(opinion xD)
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Post by waterstone on Jan 22, 2011 11:09:29 GMT -6
(I agree tinydapple )
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