Swiftkit
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Live,Laugh,Love,Harmony,Peace,Faith,Dream,and Hope.
Posts: 93
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Jan 16, 2011 1:09:03 GMT -6
Post by Swiftkit on Jan 16, 2011 1:09:03 GMT -6
*Swiftkit padded into the elder's den.She looked around* Gentleheart?Spiritstep? *She mewed looking for an elder who would tell her a story*
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Jan 16, 2011 12:20:59 GMT -6
Post by Swiftkit on Jan 16, 2011 12:20:59 GMT -6
hey Mehan!this is Dougie!your cat is so cute!
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Swiftkit
Apprentice
Live,Laugh,Love,Harmony,Peace,Faith,Dream,and Hope.
Posts: 93
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Jan 16, 2011 20:09:36 GMT -6
Post by Swiftkit on Jan 16, 2011 20:09:36 GMT -6
(Thanks and this isn't meghan.My name is Ashley)
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Jan 17, 2011 9:54:33 GMT -6
Post by waterstone on Jan 17, 2011 9:54:33 GMT -6
(hey stick to the thread.) spiritstep can you tell me a story? came a mew from behind swiftkit.
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Jan 21, 2011 14:58:57 GMT -6
Post by lui on Jan 21, 2011 14:58:57 GMT -6
( OOC: What Waterkit said. And please put all out of character talk in brackets. Out of character is when you as a person are talking, not your character. For example, I'm now speaking out of character. )
A grumble came from the former leader as she turned to face the kits.
"Yeah, yeah. What do you want to hear? A war story? An old tale? ...A love story, perhaps?" Spiritstep asked as she watched the kits that stood before her. She always had loved the things.
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Jan 28, 2011 18:58:34 GMT -6
Post by halolover on Jan 28, 2011 18:58:34 GMT -6
Whitekit walked out from behind the other kits "Can i hear a love story please" the black kit asked nicely.
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willowkit
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willowkit, i iz named after willowpelt, the greatest kitty![Mo0:4]
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Jan 29, 2011 9:32:42 GMT -6
Post by willowkit on Jan 29, 2011 9:32:42 GMT -6
willowkit came in and sat next to whitekit" can i hear it too?" she asked politely
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Loudheart
Warrior
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Just admit it.. i'm awesome[Mo0:4]
Posts: 182
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Jan 29, 2011 9:34:23 GMT -6
Post by Loudheart on Jan 29, 2011 9:34:23 GMT -6
*Loudkit walked in* "i wanna story also!"
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Jan 29, 2011 20:59:15 GMT -6
Post by Junipertree on Jan 29, 2011 20:59:15 GMT -6
Juniperkit walked in. "I want to hear the story too, please!"
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Jan 30, 2011 1:02:30 GMT -6
Post by lui on Jan 30, 2011 1:02:30 GMT -6
A half smile creased her face. "Very well. I'll tell you a story. It is true, an although from another land, it is beautiful.
Once upon a time, a love story took place.
One of bravery, romance, and tragedy.
One that changed the lives of all of us, including me, and you. Without this story, we would all be in a dark tunnel. Heading straight to Darkpool. It's deathly claws dragging us into it's depths of misery.
In the warm nursery of Fireclan, two kits lay next to each other. One very worried, the other filled with excitement. "I don't think I can do it." said the white and black kit.
"Nonsense! You'll pass." a tan kit replied.
Groaning, "No, I can't do it. I'm not ready."
"The clan needs you Skykit! This is your destiny, you can do it!"
Skykit looked at her sister, Peachkit, "You're always so positive. . ."
"How can I not when my sissy is going to be the next Medicine Cat of the great Fireclan!!!" Peachkit squealed.
A grey queen glared at the two loud kits, her stone gaze pushing the kits to stay quiet while the newborns slept.
Without a word, the kits left. Peachkit licking Skykit softly on the shoulder. It was time for Skykit to take her medicine herb test, and time for Peachkit to travel around the camp on her own. Parting ways Peachkit gladly bounded off in the opposite direction, away from her siblings dreary mood.
Chasing a leaf, the tan kit rolled around. Her eye caught something, something off. Out of place in the landscape of the Fireclan camp. Rolling back to her feet she searched around, blue eyes that matched her sisters landing on a blood-red tail leaving camp. Thank Cloudclan Skykit wasn't here, or else she could never leave the camp. . . but she wasn't suppose to. It was against the warrior code.
Curiosity got the better of her, after checking to make sure the guards weren't looking she sneaked out of the camp. Catching a glimpse of the red tail every know and again. The sent confirmed that it was Fireclan's. But unfamiliar to her sensitive nose. Hearing something she stopped dead in her tracks. Ears perked straight up.
". . . I can't leave!" said a young voice.
"You must, unless you wish for Redclan to die. It is in your blood. The blood your father, rest his soul, has placed upon you."
Watching her steps, she looked out of the thick grass. A small crimson kit, and a large tabby tom sat talking.
The red kit spoke again, "Sam I can't! I joined Fireclan. I can't betray them. . ."
Sam, the tabby, stood up, "No Bloodkit, you carry your fathers name. His blood. You have to honor him. Now is your chance to make it up to your family. You are the last one left."
"I need to think about it. Leave me at once Sam, I'll travel to Redclan if I choose to be the leader."
Nodding to the kit, Sam ran off, back into rouge territory.
"Leader? You're just a kit!" Peachkit exclaimed, thinking out loud.
Bloodkit turned with tears rolling down his cheeks, "Who goes there?"
Sadness struck in her. The kit was so distressed. His equally blood-red eyes were swollen from tears. How difficult this choice must be. She wanted to comfort him dearly. The look on his face, sound of his voice, just dragged her out of the brush.
"I'm Peachkit. Sister to Skykit, the next medicine cat of Fireclan." she meowed respectfully.
Trying to straighten himself up he shook his head, fluffing himself up to look bigger, "I'm Bloodkit, son of Bloodstar, and the future leader of Redclan."
"You can't be leader. You're just a kit, you can't possibly do something like that." Peachkit said softly, going closer to the sad kit. A worried look on her face. He was so young, being leader would kill such a. . . a. . . handsome kit. . .
"No, Peachkit. I have to, it's my destiny. I just don't-" he paused, beginning to cry again, lowering his head shamefully.
Padding quietly over to him she sat next to him, listening carefully, "Don't, what?"
Quietly, almost inaudible his small voice cried out, "Don't want to go alone. I know, it's stupid. I can't do it. I'll end up dying. Disgrace this clan. My family, everything."
"You have to at least try!" she nudged him, her positive attitude hopefully rubbing off on him, "Trying can only get you further in life."
Bloodkit stopped crying once more, after a few minutes of tears and silence. "I suppose. Thanks Peachkit." he mewed, beginning to leave Fireclan.
"Wait!" she cried, standing up.
He turned back, fully looking at her for the first time.
"I'll go with you."
And that's when our love story begins.", she paused for a moment, to let the kits talk before she continued on. Golden orbs scanned the kits before her, waiting.
( OOC: Original plot by Redspirit and Skyflight. The story itself was written by Skyflight too, so, yeah. Blame her for her talented writing! )
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willowkit
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willowkit, i iz named after willowpelt, the greatest kitty![Mo0:4]
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Jan 30, 2011 7:06:39 GMT -6
Post by willowkit on Jan 30, 2011 7:06:39 GMT -6
"wow! thanks spirtstar!"
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Jan 30, 2011 9:49:49 GMT -6
Post by Dawnpaw on Jan 30, 2011 9:49:49 GMT -6
"Come on Spiritstep! What happens next?" *Dawnkit had been listening, hidden behind the group of kits*
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Loudheart
Warrior
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Just admit it.. i'm awesome[Mo0:4]
Posts: 182
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Jan 30, 2011 9:51:32 GMT -6
Post by Loudheart on Jan 30, 2011 9:51:32 GMT -6
"wow it sounds amazing keep going!"
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mosspaw
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Wha? What did I do?[Mo0:4]
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Jan 30, 2011 9:57:32 GMT -6
Post by mosspaw on Jan 30, 2011 9:57:32 GMT -6
*mosskit is bored* so anyone want to play?
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Jan 30, 2011 10:37:57 GMT -6
Post by Dawnpaw on Jan 30, 2011 10:37:57 GMT -6
*Dawnkit looks over at her* Okay, I'll play. Until the story starts agian. *tosses a moss ball* Whack it!
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