Breaking a habit

[Sanddapple]

I'm trying to break my grammar habit or laziness if you rather.

Sandpaw woke up from her nap she had a long scratch down her side.The apprentice den was full of excitement after the battle and no one seemed to notice the sleeping cat."Can you keep it down?"Sandpaw meowed to her clan mates hoping the noise would stop, but it did not and the den was loud again.

[Sparrowfeather]

I'd rate it about a seven. Don't for get that after a period you should always put a space. So instead of
'Once upon a time,there was a land called Existance.And a girl was talking.She said "Hi."And then the end.'

It should look like this:
'Once upon a time, there was a long called Existance. And a girl was talking. She said, 'Hi.' And then the end.'

:__))