Post by Darkpaw on Jan 21, 2011 21:53:27 GMT -6
(Ok I wrote this about two years ago so it may not be go but plz read it.)
WARRIORS
A new Beginning
The sun was rising and Deathclaw was waiting for Foxstar to send a message about the Gathering where all Clan leaders come together to have a meeting. Then Deathclaw spotted a silver and gray cat coming up to him, it was Moonfur one of ThunderClan’s new warrior.
“Moonfur any word from Foxstar about the Gathering?, Deathclaw asked suspiciously. “ No, all he said was that he needed time to think”, Moonfur explained. “He also said that he thinks that ShadowClan might be planning an attack later”. I’ll tell Alley that we should double the patrols”, Deathclaw told her. “Good idea I think we should also”, Moonfur told him.
“But…” A loud yowling broke her off while Scarclaw was limping toward them. “Moonfur, Deathclaw” Scarclaw hissed.
“Scarclaw what happened to your eye it’s bleeding”. Moonfur said scared. “Foxstar was right ShadowClan are invading our territory”! Scarclaw explained. “Come on Moonfur we’ve got to help them”!
Deathclaw said. “Ok lets go” said Moonfur. As they raced to where the battle was going on Deathclaw and Moonfur raced to where Fuzzytail was laying on his side fighting for breath. “Fuzzytail what happened” Deathclaw asked. “We’re being attacked by ShadowClan.” Fuzzytail explained. As Deathclaw turned around to lookfor Moonfur to take Fuzzytail to the medicine cat, he saw Foxstar battling with the ShadowClan leader, then he spotted Moonfur fighting a ShadowClan warrior as he called for her. “Moonfur”! Deathclaw yowled. But there was no response.
He raced over and clawed the ShadowClan warrior’s neck to push him away from Moonfur. “Moonfur can you please take Fuzzytail over to the medicine cat”? He asked. “Sure she responded.
Then the ShadowClan warrior got up and attacked Deathclaw. As they warred, Deathclaw shoved his teeth into where he clawed him, and finally the ShadowClan cat breathed his last breath and then died.
Deathclaw had won. Then he saw another ShadowClan cat battling Foxstar. Deathclaw raced over to Foxstar’s side to fight with him.
“So this might be the answer to our question about the Gathering is it”? Deathclaw asked fighting the ShadowClan warrior.
“No, I’ve made my mind up and I’m going”! Foxstar said fiercely.
Soon the ShadowClan cats retreted and ThunderClan had won.
Foxstar can me and Moonfur have apprentices now? Deathclaw asked. An apprentice you two didn’t do a thing for me in the battle, why should I give you and Moonfur apprentices, because eof you two I lost a life! The answer is no, tell Moonfur that too got it! Foxstar hissed. Yes Foxstar I’ll tell Moonfur that. Deathclaw said saddely. Now leave my den at ounce! Foxstar said maddely. Yes Foxstar. So Deathclaw leaved the leader’s den and headed for the medicine cat’s den was when he saw Moonfur sitting outside the entrance.
Deathclaw, what did Foxstar say about me and you having apprentices? Moonfur asked.
He said no he says that because of us he lost a life. Deathclaw explained. Wait what’s about this lives thing? Moonfur asked. Deathclaw forgot that Moonfur has just joined the Clan and she didn’t know about the lives.
Well every leader of each Clan has to go to a place called Highstones, and they aren’t supposed to eat on the journey… Why not eat I mean they have to be hungry on the way there? Moonfur asked. I’m not really sure I think only the leaders know. Anyway at Highstones there’s a rock called the Moonstone where at night the leader sleeps next to it putting there nose on there rock and they share dreams with StarClan. And they receive there nine lives. Deathclaw finished. Wow, that’s so cool, I wish I was a leader. She said. Moonfur how do you feel in this Clan? Deathclaw asked. Very very unappreciated. Moonfur answered. Same here, I mean I’ve been here so long and I’ve been begging for an apprentice but Foxstar says I’m no help to the Clan and I really am, same as you Moonfur, to me I think you’re a great help, you brought Fuzzytail to the medicine cat in the war earlier and you helped fight and I saved Fox star’s life helping him with the ShadowClan leader and a warrior, and… Then Deathclaw had a great idea. Ha Moonfur how would you think of forming our own Clan? Deathclaw asked. Ok what should we name it… wait I know how about MoonClan, is that a good name? She asked. That’s a great name all we need is a medicine cat and some apprentices and some warriors and BOOM we got our selves a Clan. Deathclaw said. That’s great but what about the leader and deputy you can be the leader and I could be the deputy. Moonfur said excitedly. No you always wanted to be leader so you will be the leader and I’ll be the deputy Ok? Deathclaw said. Ok! Moonfur said. Ok so now we have the new Clan what are we going to do everybody knows we’re ThunderClan cats? We are going to attack our former Clan but mostly the first cat we will attack will be… Foxstar.
To Be Continued
WARRIORS
A new Beginning
The sun was rising and Deathclaw was waiting for Foxstar to send a message about the Gathering where all Clan leaders come together to have a meeting. Then Deathclaw spotted a silver and gray cat coming up to him, it was Moonfur one of ThunderClan’s new warrior.
“Moonfur any word from Foxstar about the Gathering?, Deathclaw asked suspiciously. “ No, all he said was that he needed time to think”, Moonfur explained. “He also said that he thinks that ShadowClan might be planning an attack later”. I’ll tell Alley that we should double the patrols”, Deathclaw told her. “Good idea I think we should also”, Moonfur told him.
“But…” A loud yowling broke her off while Scarclaw was limping toward them. “Moonfur, Deathclaw” Scarclaw hissed.
“Scarclaw what happened to your eye it’s bleeding”. Moonfur said scared. “Foxstar was right ShadowClan are invading our territory”! Scarclaw explained. “Come on Moonfur we’ve got to help them”!
Deathclaw said. “Ok lets go” said Moonfur. As they raced to where the battle was going on Deathclaw and Moonfur raced to where Fuzzytail was laying on his side fighting for breath. “Fuzzytail what happened” Deathclaw asked. “We’re being attacked by ShadowClan.” Fuzzytail explained. As Deathclaw turned around to lookfor Moonfur to take Fuzzytail to the medicine cat, he saw Foxstar battling with the ShadowClan leader, then he spotted Moonfur fighting a ShadowClan warrior as he called for her. “Moonfur”! Deathclaw yowled. But there was no response.
He raced over and clawed the ShadowClan warrior’s neck to push him away from Moonfur. “Moonfur can you please take Fuzzytail over to the medicine cat”? He asked. “Sure she responded.
Then the ShadowClan warrior got up and attacked Deathclaw. As they warred, Deathclaw shoved his teeth into where he clawed him, and finally the ShadowClan cat breathed his last breath and then died.
Deathclaw had won. Then he saw another ShadowClan cat battling Foxstar. Deathclaw raced over to Foxstar’s side to fight with him.
“So this might be the answer to our question about the Gathering is it”? Deathclaw asked fighting the ShadowClan warrior.
“No, I’ve made my mind up and I’m going”! Foxstar said fiercely.
Soon the ShadowClan cats retreted and ThunderClan had won.
Foxstar can me and Moonfur have apprentices now? Deathclaw asked. An apprentice you two didn’t do a thing for me in the battle, why should I give you and Moonfur apprentices, because eof you two I lost a life! The answer is no, tell Moonfur that too got it! Foxstar hissed. Yes Foxstar I’ll tell Moonfur that. Deathclaw said saddely. Now leave my den at ounce! Foxstar said maddely. Yes Foxstar. So Deathclaw leaved the leader’s den and headed for the medicine cat’s den was when he saw Moonfur sitting outside the entrance.
Deathclaw, what did Foxstar say about me and you having apprentices? Moonfur asked.
He said no he says that because of us he lost a life. Deathclaw explained. Wait what’s about this lives thing? Moonfur asked. Deathclaw forgot that Moonfur has just joined the Clan and she didn’t know about the lives.
Well every leader of each Clan has to go to a place called Highstones, and they aren’t supposed to eat on the journey… Why not eat I mean they have to be hungry on the way there? Moonfur asked. I’m not really sure I think only the leaders know. Anyway at Highstones there’s a rock called the Moonstone where at night the leader sleeps next to it putting there nose on there rock and they share dreams with StarClan. And they receive there nine lives. Deathclaw finished. Wow, that’s so cool, I wish I was a leader. She said. Moonfur how do you feel in this Clan? Deathclaw asked. Very very unappreciated. Moonfur answered. Same here, I mean I’ve been here so long and I’ve been begging for an apprentice but Foxstar says I’m no help to the Clan and I really am, same as you Moonfur, to me I think you’re a great help, you brought Fuzzytail to the medicine cat in the war earlier and you helped fight and I saved Fox star’s life helping him with the ShadowClan leader and a warrior, and… Then Deathclaw had a great idea. Ha Moonfur how would you think of forming our own Clan? Deathclaw asked. Ok what should we name it… wait I know how about MoonClan, is that a good name? She asked. That’s a great name all we need is a medicine cat and some apprentices and some warriors and BOOM we got our selves a Clan. Deathclaw said. That’s great but what about the leader and deputy you can be the leader and I could be the deputy. Moonfur said excitedly. No you always wanted to be leader so you will be the leader and I’ll be the deputy Ok? Deathclaw said. Ok! Moonfur said. Ok so now we have the new Clan what are we going to do everybody knows we’re ThunderClan cats? We are going to attack our former Clan but mostly the first cat we will attack will be… Foxstar.
To Be Continued
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