Infernoheart
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Love is like fire; it may be warm, but no matter what, it'll always end up hurting you.[Mo0:6]
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Post by Infernoheart on Jan 25, 2011 16:40:09 GMT -6
(like my title?)
Infernopaw padded into the apprentice den, where she would now stay. She chose a nest near the outer part of the den that was not yet taken, and laid down.
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Post by Fernpelt on Jan 25, 2011 20:11:42 GMT -6
(Infernopaw, your name must be changed, cats have never used the name 'inferno' in context. You are violating rule 16. Thank you.)
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Infernoheart
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Love is like fire; it may be warm, but no matter what, it'll always end up hurting you.[Mo0:6]
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Post by Infernoheart on Jan 26, 2011 18:06:17 GMT -6
(someone probably would have told me if it was wrong. And in the books i have heard of cats using the word inferno, so technically it's okay)
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Post by Fernpelt on Jan 27, 2011 17:27:21 GMT -6
(Excuse me, I am someone. Was it in context, or in the narrator's voice? Which book and which chapter? Ihate to be the bad guy, but unless you can show me where it is in context, you must change it.)
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Infernoheart
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Love is like fire; it may be warm, but no matter what, it'll always end up hurting you.[Mo0:6]
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Post by Infernoheart on Jan 28, 2011 16:53:29 GMT -6
(*sighs* fine. but, can i have a suggestion for what to change it to? i still want it to be something similar to inferno)
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Infernoheart
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Love is like fire; it may be warm, but no matter what, it'll always end up hurting you.[Mo0:6]
Posts: 205
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Post by Infernoheart on Jan 28, 2011 18:55:33 GMT -6
(i already took it up with some leaders. they said it was okay to use, so im leaving it)
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