Measage cats.

[Sanddapple]

Please enjoy!I know it's short.



Sage was padding through a tunnel a tunnel that inside was loud and had rushing water but a tunnel. Sage was a highly trained cat she was trained to walk these tunnels and deliver messages secretly. The cats could tell where they were supposed to head by a GPS in there fur.
Sage kept going she was headed to a research facility for the FBI it was a long way to go and she had to be there by sundown. If she did not she would not only be discarded from the team the FBI would not get there stuff and if they did not there country would be in trouble.Sage kept going her paw was sore and her silver fur dirty but she was so close oh so close.Sage padded on she stopped to lap at some water but then moved on why did they never allow cats to go above ground she knew they would be could and not help deliver but still.
Sage had finally got to her destination a small desert it was hot there but sage knew that inside it was warm now all she had to do was find an air duct to crawl through. She had to crawl through the air duct so no one would see her except who needed to.
Sage had made it to the duct she squeezed herself through to get to the other side.

[Dashfire]

First of all, where is the descriptiveness? A tunnel can't be loud. It can be loud inside the tunnel, but a tunnel can't be loud. There are several typos, and you misspelled message twice making me think you can't spell that. Where did you describe the backstory? Why is the FBI using cats? You misspelled research and supposed too after editing it. What happenned to make your character a spy cat or whatever the devil they are called? Why was she trained to walk only through tunnels? Why did she have to be there by sundown? Where is this taking place? And finally, that's way too short. I know you said it was short but that was hardly a story paragraph.

[Sanddapple]

Fixed some of the bugs for you I'll make it longer later.

[Whitefire]

Good, but describe more of your story. Also some misspellings, and some spaces. Otherwise, all good!!

[Dashfire]

The editing helped alot but there are still many miswordings and the like. For example, in a hot desert why would you want a warm building?