Specklepaw
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Fullmetal Alchemist fag? I think so.[Mo0:13]
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Post by Specklepaw on Apr 11, 2011 21:58:06 GMT -6
That's right folks~! It's a contest~! Except it's not a drawing contest, it's a literature one~ I am planning on making a graphic warriors novel, and I need ideas for the plots. So, I am really open to whatever you throw at me, and the plot doesn't have to be really big, just a general copy. There will be one first place prize, and one first place prize ONLY.
So, just throw out ideas, but make it interesting.
First Place; Credit in the novel (Obviously) A drawing Request A quick sketch request
Anddddd Something else
But I can't think what right now
Anyways, have fun and thanks~!
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Robin
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Post by Robin on Apr 12, 2011 18:41:47 GMT -6
I have some questions~
~How detailed do you want it to be? ~Do you have any specific characters/clans/anything you want to be included in the plot? ~Do you want me to make up characters to be included in the plot, or do you have ones? ~What are the Clan names ~How long can it be? ~Am I going on about this to long? XP
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Post by hopekit1 on Apr 12, 2011 19:38:55 GMT -6
○○◎//P L O T¢¯// T I M E//○○◎ [/size] I'll try![/i][/b] Alright, can I try?
A desease is begining to spread to through the clans. (Insertclanname) is hit the worse, cats die every day. (insertmadicinecat1name) is hit with the desease and just before (he/she) dies (he/she) gives a statement:
"Watch the ash covered claw,"
Exactly a season afterwards a litter of kits is born in another clan. They are named Ashkit, (insertkitname2) and (Insertkitname3). Their mother, who lived through the desease as an apprentice, named (Insertqueennamehere), died giving birth to them. It just so happened she was the medicine cat after (insertmedicinecatname1). No cat would cut the kits any slack, and they were eager to prove themselves. When they were apprentices Ashpaw and (his/her) siblings were chasing foxes out of their territory. As they came to a cliff they drove the foxes too fast, and (insertkit3name) died. Ashpaw was behind [color=121212(him/her) and as a warrior caught up, it looked as if AShpaw had pushed (him/her) off. Only (inserkit2name) knew the truth, but nobody believed (Him/her).
Ashpaw got the warrior name Ashclaw. (His/Her) (brother/sister) (insertkitname2) fell ill and left Ashclaw alone. (He/She) got most of the clan's prey, and was out out of the camp alot. (He/She) fell in love with a cat from (insertotherclanname). Eventually they run off together. (insertclanname) realises how much they needed Ashclaw after their fresh-kill began to run low, and warriors began to get sick again.
They serch for Ashclaw and (his/her) new mate, to find that they had found a new herb, one that cured the sickness. They begged them to come back, which after much persuading they did, Ashclaw's mate came with. For once Ashclaw was accepted.
*= Your choice.
Very rough idea of a plot, I hope you like it ^^[/center]
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Robin
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Post by Robin on Apr 12, 2011 20:17:28 GMT -6
PLOT!!!!
Okay~ So, this is the beginning of my plot, it isn't very detailed, and I am sorry, but I used names for the characters and the Clans, it just made it easier to write. But I hope you like it, please feel free to tell me what you liked and disliked and what I could do to make it better Blazetree and Honeyfur, loyal warriors of WillowClan, decide to join together as one. Shortly after they become mates, Honeyfur has found out she is to have kits!
Moons pass, and finally, she gives birth to a pair of healthy kits, a tiny she-kit and tom, whom she names Larkkit and Thornkit. The two kits grow up a normal life, or so it seems. In their early moons as an apprentice, they come to find that they posess powers unknown to everyone but themselves.
Larkpaw can see into the future and Thornpaw has a direct connection to StarClan. Unfortunately the Clans leader, Blazestar overheard them talking one day, and, deciding that he could use their powers to assist his Clan, takes them hostage, telling the whole Clan that he found their remains covered in fox scent.
Afraid and angry, the two apprentices break free from his confining den, rushing out to the territory that surrounds their own, the territory that was known as Loner Territory. But, alas, not everything can be perfect, for Blazestar sends 7 of his best warriors out to find them. Word of the escaped cats and the warriors sent after them spread quickly to the other Clans.
The leaders of SnowClan, BirchClan and StoneClan begin to meet in secret once every quarter moon, then, finally decide to band together and attack the usually larger Clan, then, will devide the territory between the three that remain.
On their journey, they meet a friendly she-cat named Smoke, who tells them of a far away place were cats live that call themselves the Tribe of Wandering Birds. The two siblings, eyes alit with wonder demande that the she-cat take them there. But, the warriors soon catch up to them, easily following the clumsy apprentices trail, but, unknown to them, the warriors wait to see their destination, then and only then will they pounce.
Smoke begins to take them to the Tribe when, all of a sudden, Larkpaw has a vision of her Clan being viciously attacked by SeaClan, a rival to her own. In a flurry of panick she pleads to her brother to ask StarClan what it means, then, they discover that the three smaller Clans, SnowClan, BirchClan and StoneClan have formed together to attack and overthrow WillowClan.
In a rush of worry and panick they run directly into the warriors sent from her own Clan. She find that, while the 7 warriors were traveling, they met up with 2 quite fiesty rogues, both Toms, one named Kestrel and the other named Hawk.
Larkpaw is quick to tell them of he Clans danger and they are able to sneak back into camp without the other Clans knowing. The battle soon starts, but end just as quickly as before. As soon as the three Clans that banded together found that they were outnumbered they fled immediatly.
For saving the Clan, Blazestar apologizes to them and begs forgivness. In a bout of happiness he gives them their warrior names, Larkpaw became Larksong, and Thornpaw became Thornpelt.
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Specklepaw
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Fullmetal Alchemist fag? I think so.[Mo0:13]
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Post by Specklepaw on Apr 13, 2011 16:52:40 GMT -6
PLOT!!!!
Okay~ So, this is the beginning of my plot, it isn't very detailed, and I am sorry, but I used names for the characters and the Clans, it just made it easier to write. But I hope you like it, please feel free to tell me what you liked and disliked and what I could do to make it better Blazetree and Honeyfur, loyal warriors of WillowClan, decide to join together as one. Shortly after they become mates, Honeyfur has found out she is to have kits!
Moons pass, and finally, she gives birth to a pair of healthy kits, a tiny she-kit and tom, whom she names Larkkit and Thornkit. The two kits grow up a normal life, or so it seems. In their early moons as an apprentice, they come to find that they posess powers unknown to everyone but themselves.
Larkpaw can see into the future and Thornpaw has a direct connection to StarClan. Unfortunately the Clans leader, Blazestar overheard them talking one day, and, deciding that he could use their powers to assist his Clan, takes them hostage, telling the whole Clan that he found their remains covered in fox scent.
Afraid and angry, the two apprentices break free from his confining den, rushing out to the territory that surrounds their own, the territory that was known as Loner Territory. But, alas, not everything can be perfect, for Blazestar sends 7 of his best warriors out to find them. Word of the escaped cats and the warriors sent after them spread quickly to the other Clans.
The leaders of SnowClan, BirchClan and StoneClan begin to meet in secret once every quarter moon, then, finally decide to band together and attack the usually larger Clan, then, will devide the territory between the three that remain.
On their journey, they meet a friendly she-cat named Smoke, who tells them of a far away place were cats live that call themselves the Tribe of Wandering Birds. The two siblings, eyes alit with wonder demande that the she-cat take them there. But, the warriors soon catch up to them, easily following the clumsy apprentices trail, but, unknown to them, the warriors wait to see their destination, then and only then will they pounce.
Smoke begins to take them to the Tribe when, all of a sudden, Larkpaw has a vision of her Clan being viciously attacked by SeaClan, a rival to her own. In a flurry of panick she pleads to her brother to ask StarClan what it means, then, they discover that the three smaller Clans, SnowClan, BirchClan and StoneClan have formed together to attack and overthrow WillowClan.
In a rush of worry and panick they run directly into the warriors sent from her own Clan. She find that, while the 7 warriors were traveling, they met up with 2 quite fiesty rogues, both Toms, one named Kestrel and the other named Hawk.
Larkpaw is quick to tell them of he Clans danger and they are able to sneak back into camp without the other Clans knowing. The battle soon starts, but end just as quickly as before. As soon as the three Clans that banded together found that they were outnumbered they fled immediatly.
For saving the Clan, Blazestar apologizes to them and begs forgivness. In a bout of happiness he gives them their warrior names, Larkpaw became Larksong, and Thornpaw became Thornpelt.
That's okay~ Not really my favorite, considering the newest warrior books are really similar to that~ Try again~? If you'd like, that is~ ○○◎//P L O T¢¯// T I M E//○○◎ [/size] I'll try![/i][/b] Alright, can I try?
A desease is begining to spread to through the clans. (Insertclanname) is hit the worse, cats die every day. (insertmadicinecat1name) is hit with the desease and just before (he/she) dies (he/she) gives a statement:
"Watch the ash covered claw,"
Exactly a season afterwards a litter of kits is born in another clan. They are named Ashkit, (insertkitname2) and (Insertkitname3). Their mother, who lived through the desease as an apprentice, named (Insertqueennamehere), died giving birth to them. It just so happened she was the medicine cat after (insertmedicinecatname1). No cat would cut the kits any slack, and they were eager to prove themselves. When they were apprentices Ashpaw and (his/her) siblings were chasing foxes out of their territory. As they came to a cliff they drove the foxes too fast, and (insertkit3name) died. Ashpaw was behind [color=121212(him/her) and as a warrior caught up, it looked as if AShpaw had pushed (him/her) off. Only (inserkit2name) knew the truth, but nobody believed (Him/her).
Ashpaw got the warrior name Ashclaw. (His/Her) (brother/sister) (insertkitname2) fell ill and left Ashclaw alone. (He/She) got most of the clan's prey, and was out out of the camp alot. (He/She) fell in love with a cat from (insertotherclanname). Eventually they run off together. (insertclanname) realises how much they needed Ashclaw after their fresh-kill began to run low, and warriors began to get sick again.
They serch for Ashclaw and (his/her) new mate, to find that they had found a new herb, one that cured the sickness. They begged them to come back, which after much persuading they did, Ashclaw's mate came with. For once Ashclaw was accepted.
*= Your choice.
Very rough idea of a plot, I hope you like it ^^[/center][/quote] Oh that is actually a really good idea. I love it. <3 I have some questions~ ~How detailed do you want it to be? ~Do you have any specific characters/clans/anything you want to be included in the plot? ~Do you want me to make up characters to be included in the plot, or do you have ones? ~What are the Clan names ~How long can it be? ~Am I going on about this to long? XP ~As detailed as you think it should be. I'm not looking for every single detail, but a few are nice ~No specific characters, but the Clans I would prefer would be the ones in the books ~Mind making up the characters for me? ~ShadowClan, RiverClan, WindClan and ThunderClan ~As long as you want, but not more then 2000+ Words ~No, no.
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Post by Sanddapple on Apr 14, 2011 12:13:59 GMT -6
Plot The clans (Doveclan (leafclan Adderclan Sunclan) are about to face the untimate test of survival when a EF 5 tornado comes there way few die but will others die without Dawns stream where Moonclan stays is destroyes will there ansestors be gone forever? Thats all I have so far
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Post by Poppykit on Apr 16, 2011 17:35:23 GMT -6
[Urm, I was Hopekit, I didn't keep the account, just to let you know, Moon/Specklekit~!]
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