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Post by Gentleheart on Apr 14, 2011 19:40:26 GMT -6
 I spent a good amount of time on this. I thought I'd show you people it, and ask what needs improvement? I know the hands are poop, and anatomy's probably off, but it wasn't supposed to be realistic. |
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Post by Sanddapple on Apr 15, 2011 15:02:35 GMT -6
That is so good! I have another site I go on and a pic like that is what I need!Can you do it, please.You are a amazing artist!
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Post by Oakspirit on Apr 16, 2011 9:25:29 GMT -6
I am not taking requests at this time. Sorry.
Guys, I want you to yell at me, and tell me what's wrong. Please.
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Post by Koisplash on Apr 16, 2011 16:57:53 GMT -6
This is overall good. But; since you want a critique, I'll give it.
Okay; so I love the shading. I also like the mountains and sun in the background, and you pretty much nailed the expressions on their faces. Their clothes are good, and I like how you've done their hair and eyes.
But---I know you don't care, but just had to throw this out there---some anatomy was off; the brunette's knees should be more bent. Plus; the other girl's waist should show more twist in it; you know, because of her position, and you could show her other leg underneath the bent one; but if that was what you were intending, then never mind. You could also show her other red eye a little underneath her hair; otherwise that sort of makes it look like she only has one eye.
I also think maybe the background was a little too faded; it sort of looks flat compared to your characters in it. I know I said I liked it; but it could use some work. The shading and fading were good; but you could also blend in some sharper colors, to make it stand out more, such as darker greens for the grass.
But; overall; I like this picture. Nice job!
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