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Post by Dawnsun on Apr 22, 2011 17:03:25 GMT -6
Took me about 25 minutes. But mostly because of that background. >.< On a scale from 1 to 5, how good is it? Any constructive criticism?
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Post by Darkning on Apr 22, 2011 17:15:55 GMT -6
Its Quiet Good Accually
FEw Things though
There Needs to be a Bitmore of Snow andThat One Paw Needs to be skinnyer
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Post by Dawnsun on Apr 22, 2011 17:43:52 GMT -6
Thanks!
Yeah, I kinda rushed on the snow. >.<
And yeah, paw practice would work!
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Post by Swiftwish on Apr 23, 2011 17:18:13 GMT -6
I la-la-love the detail on the heart. But I have to agree with Darkning with this one, the snow does look very rushed, and the cat lying down looks a bit rushed too. But the gray cat standing up looks quite good. But if I were you, I would make the text bigger, because I can hardly see it.
Remember, A good art piece dosen't take five minutes. If you want to be a Harrowingpride, art takes time and practice.
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Post by Bouncepaw on Apr 23, 2011 18:49:29 GMT -6
Dawnsun~
Alright, thanks for the tips! The problem is, and I admit it, I'm a very impatient person.
I try not to be impatient with my with art, but . . . yeah. And I tend to put myself down.
Why is everyone rating it a 4, by the way? o.o
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Post by Bluewish on Apr 23, 2011 19:00:48 GMT -6
i know youve heard this but it should be stressed, the snow is rushed. i actually think all the cats look fine. and i had no clue there even was a text in there 0.o also i think the blood dripping from the heart could use a little more work however all in all this is a very good picture
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Post by Bouncepaw on Apr 23, 2011 19:26:05 GMT -6
Yeah, tell me about it. Makes me want to redo it, big time, the more I look at it.
The text looked much bigger in the original file size. I just had to resize the picture, otherwise it would be way too big. >.<
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Post by Xero on Apr 27, 2011 16:52:13 GMT -6
If you get impatient then drawing pictures or art around that area probably insnt your thing. Find something else thats fast paced and keeps you interested.
Personally i ranked this a 3 or a 2.8
Art shouldnt be rushed and if your impatient then find something else. Thats my opinion.
And if your uber self concious then art isnt your thing, it gets bashed and criticed all the time. sometimes it gets comments but more offten then not it doesn't.
I'm not trying to be mean just stating my opinion.
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Post by Bouncepaw on Apr 27, 2011 19:12:58 GMT -6
Yeah, I thought the exact same thing for a long time, but I just love to draw. It's kinda hard to explain.
I understand what you're going at. But if I quit art, I'll have nothing else to do. Art's my passion.
I respect your opinion 100%, but I won't quit trying to get better. I'm not a quiter, and never have been.
I asked for the criticism anyway, so of course I won't think you're being mean.
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Post by Redstorm on Apr 27, 2011 19:20:56 GMT -6
One of the biggest things I noticed is the cat at the top left.
It reminds me of Redstorm xD
Brown (looking) with reddish stripes with green (looking) eyes xD
I agree with all above posts about the other cats and snow. But this is very good in general.
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