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Post by Darkning on Apr 23, 2011 15:19:46 GMT -6
 Well, GOod Bad extra. IF You want i will do request |
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Post by Whitefire on Apr 23, 2011 15:44:50 GMT -6
Um, it could do some editing. I'll show you a picture that I'll draw for you.  |
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Post by Xiv on Apr 23, 2011 15:56:39 GMT -6
Darkning:
Tellme Whats Wrong with it ._.
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Post by Leoparddash on Apr 23, 2011 16:00:10 GMT -6
One of the back paws are a bit to thick, and the backs too square but otherwise great drawing. You have good potential.
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Bluewish
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Post by Bluewish on Apr 23, 2011 19:06:50 GMT -6
the head is a little big in comparison to its body, its butt is kinda square and your angles are off.
like the shading on its body suggests different angles than the direction ok its head and the legs also suggest different angles. to fix that mabey make the line that shows the back of the back leg a little taller and mabey cutting off the tail. also its kinda skinney,
overall needs work the background is a little rushed ooking but very good keep drawing!
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