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Post by Honeykit on May 8, 2011 12:22:07 GMT -6
Honeykit limped into the Medicine Cats' den. "Hello?" She called. "Something happened to my leg. Whenever I put pressure on it, it hurts! I was walking around the camp, a little bored, then I heard a weird, like, a snapping sort sound...? But I can't move it! Its not even bleeding or anything! I think its broken."  No, I wasnt just walking... if thats what you were gonna ask. I tripped on something... I think it was a rock, but Im not sure. Then my leg just went... Boom .-. I fell on top of it and THEN I heard the snapping sort sound. |
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Post by Redstorm on May 8, 2011 12:30:59 GMT -6
(Honeykit, legs don't magically brake just by walking. I'm not trying to be rude, but helpful. I'm trying to make your posts better and more realistic, so you can grow on here to be an RP legend  I understand a broken bone cold be an interesting thing to RP but you need to make up a logical reason for it to have broken, not just it randomly snapping. And since your not allowed out of camp I suggest falling off a rock while playing on it, or having an adult accidentally step on your paw, braking it and the leg, that happened to my dog.) |
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Solarstorm
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"Meadowflower, you are my single ray of sunshine on a cloudy day."- ~ Solarstorm ~ <3
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Post by Solarstorm on May 8, 2011 16:24:49 GMT -6
(I agree with Redstorm. Heres an idea: You could be play fighting with some other kits outside the Nursery, and one of them tries to swipe you with their paw. As you step back to avoid it, you step in a small hole covered under some leaves and break your ankle. That sounds a bit better, plus its more realistic. Heck I sprained my ankle the other day when I was walking in the woods behind my house and I stepped in an old rabbit hole.)
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Bronzefang
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Post by Bronzefang on May 8, 2011 19:26:16 GMT -6
(how about you you twisted your paw when you triped on a rock. I did that to my foot two years ago not fun at all.)
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Post by Honeykit on May 9, 2011 14:43:19 GMT -6
(Honeykit, legs don't magically brake just by walking. I'm not trying to be rude, but helpful. I'm trying to make your posts better and more realistic, so you can grow on here to be an RP legend I understand a broken bone cold be an interesting thing to RP but you need to make up a logical reason for it to have broken, not just it randomly snapping. And since your not allowed out of camp I suggest falling off a rock while playing on it, or having an adult accidentally step on your paw, braking it and the leg, that happened to my dog.) |
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No, I wasnt just walking... if thats what you were gonna ask. I tripped on something... I think it was a rock, but Im not sure. Then my leg just went... Boom .-. I fell on top of it and THEN I heard the snapping sort sound.
I understand a broken bone cold be an interesting thing to RP but you need to make up a logical reason for it to have broken, not just it randomly snapping. And since your not allowed out of camp I suggest falling off a rock while playing on it, or having an adult accidentally step on your paw, braking it and the leg, that happened to my dog.)
