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Post by Koisplash on May 14, 2011 4:25:30 GMT -6
 It's just some picture I made on MS Paint that I didn't/don't feel like coloring in; but I think it's pretty good. I s'pose it's mainly just an experiment on expressions and things like that. Sorry; I'm not taking requests. I'd just like to receive some critique. And yes; I know cats can't blush; but I just felt like adding it in to increase the tension-y atmosphere. So; comments? |
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Post by Rosekit on May 14, 2011 4:38:58 GMT -6
Leoparddash --
Very nice picture Koi. I am no professional artists or what not, but its great. Though the furs a bit to thick, there should be smaller, thinner slits of fur. Also the eyes are a bit; funny.
But still, it is a very good picture for using MS Paint. I think you should keep working on your drawings, and color them too. It is indeed great potential!
Have you ever tried Gimp?
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Post by Koisplash on May 14, 2011 4:56:41 GMT -6
Thanks for the comments. No; I haven't tried Gimp; all I have is Paint to work with.
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Post by tinysplash on May 14, 2011 5:02:03 GMT -6
That's really good! I wish I could draw as well as you.....
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Post by Bouncepaw on May 14, 2011 8:06:05 GMT -6
It's a pretty good picture. A few things wrong with it;
The lineart is a bit messy. Might I suggest using the curve tool? Also, the paws are a bit funny, but I also have that same problem as well.
So you mainly need to work on keeping the lines straight, but otherwise that's a great picture!
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Post by Mousefeather on May 14, 2011 12:57:15 GMT -6
I feel your troubleness kio, I too have to rely on Ms. What i suggest doing is draw it by hand, then scan it onto your computer then trace/color over it with MS. ^^ Its better then what i could do the first time i used Ms to draw cats.
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Post by Bluewish on May 14, 2011 20:06:24 GMT -6
i think it is very good, though the cats faces are kinda flat and their front legs should be longer or be curved to show that they are longer. other than that i thought this was a very beautiful picture
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Post by Oakspirit on May 15, 2011 12:33:24 GMT -6
The anatomy is off is several places, and the eyes are really big. I think you should work on trying to draw a little more realistically, just as a suggestion.
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Post by Koisplash on May 15, 2011 19:44:23 GMT -6
The anatomy is off is several places, and the eyes are really big. I think you should work on trying to draw a little more realistically, just as a suggestion. I probably will try to make them seem more realistic; but maybe not completely. And thanks for the criticism; everyone. |
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Post by fire1001 on May 15, 2011 20:38:59 GMT -6
It's really good, way better then what i can do lol
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Post by Emberfeather on May 22, 2011 3:52:28 GMT -6
Good, very good, but square.
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Post by Ebony on May 28, 2011 15:54:00 GMT -6
It looks like you worked hard on it, but... Your lines look a little skaky, and I'm not a fan of the right cat's whiskers. I find that the noses are a little odd, and the ears are large. I think with a little more practice, you have the potential to be really good.  Sorry if I offended you or was too critical. |
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Post by Firelight on May 28, 2011 19:34:39 GMT -6
Lawl, literal critique~
*Description-non-objective listing-: Two cats, blush, poink, lines, blue , sweat drop
*Formal Analysis-most and least used element- :Most used is line. Least used is color
*Interpretation-hyothesis on why it was made-: 'cause koi felt like it
*Judgement-Ranking of all art pieces- One of the best of hers of the few I've seen. Great work!
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Post by Tasmanian on May 28, 2011 19:49:40 GMT -6
I suggest you leave more space between the eyes and the nose. And you should really get Gimp, I use it and it's real fun. It's a free download, and I suggest you zoom in the picture so the brush strokes aren't shaky. <3 |
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