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Post by Oakspirit on May 15, 2011 11:51:06 GMT -6
I drew this today. I have to say that this is one of my best pictures. I left it transparent 'cause I are background fail. Can you tell me whats wrong? Anatomy issues? Do not ask for a request, please, or tell me that it's perfect. Because it's not. I also tried an icon for the first time:  Yeah... needs practice... EDIT;; The words are bad-looking because they're black on a black background. To see them better, click here. |
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Post by Flora on May 15, 2011 12:34:59 GMT -6
It's pretty good. The tail and ears are misshapen though.
I'll give you a 6/10
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Post by Oakspirit on May 15, 2011 12:43:01 GMT -6
What exactly is wrong with the ears and tail? I meant to make the tail like that, sort of horse-like and bushy, if you're wondering. And since she's in motion, the ears are 'flying in the wind'. Please be descriptive. I need the help. :]
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Post by Moonkit on May 15, 2011 13:03:35 GMT -6
Well anatomy wise, the legs are a tad weird.
Your over exaggerating the muscle in in the top part of the front leg.
Most of the time, you should even be pointing out that part of the leg.
With he back legs, there is too much, well I would guess, skin over lapping.
It reminds me of a pug's skin.
oh, and their a tad long, but that could just be the general structure of the character.
The ears look a tad unnatural, but nothing to worry about.
it's just how their are on the body.
I understand that the pose is in motion, but, I don't know. . .
But like I said nothing to worry about!
The legs are to only part I would fix.
All in all, it's a very good pose and colour scheme.
I especially like the tail and how you mixed and integrated the colours~!
I would give it a 8 out of 10!
Good job!
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Post by Oakspirit on May 15, 2011 13:06:44 GMT -6
I see what you mean about the legs. They usually give me trouble, not to make excuses for myself or anything. Thanks!
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Post by Sanddapple on May 15, 2011 13:49:59 GMT -6
A.The ears look like a deer's
B. you should move the hind legs down a little it looks like it will topple at any moment
C. the fur on the neck should be faceing down
D.You miss did the line on the tail it is hanging off the edge
other wise you did amazing expecially with the shadowing
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Pitch
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Post by Pitch on May 15, 2011 15:29:41 GMT -6
A. I don't see it. Deer ears are staight up, not floppy?
B. I don't get it. It's a mid-motion pose
C. Not all dog breeds have flat fur. It's part of the design,
D. I don't understand...?
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Post by Birchwing on May 20, 2011 22:50:41 GMT -6
ok so the only things i can say is that the top halfs of the ears are too detached and the second eye is looking up while the other is looking to the right side of the pic.
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