My Pain...: Please Reply =P

[Swiftwish]

^{Every time I bleed}
_{I encourage it}
^{I feel the same inside}
_{Why should it hurt me?}
^{Yes, why should it hurt me?}
_{A thousand knifes}
^{A million guns}
_{They all cant top}
^{My pain..}
_{I need some help}
^{But I refuse it}
_{Not one therapist}
^{Could sooth}
_{My pain..}
^{You make me happy}
_{But everytime}
^{You call her}
_{My pain}
^{Gets worse..}
_{My soul seems to}
^{Shrivel up}
_{Theres one thing for sure}
^{I feel like}




_{I die a little more inside}



^{Every day..}

[perceus500]

Very, very good! You're one truck of a poet. I see very few spelling fails in your poems, but they're excellent aside from the few that exist.

[Swiftwish]

Why thank you, its a knack I had for a year or so.

[kady]

swift-eh you are a genious. <3 I absolutley luffles you -hugs her- i've misssseddd youuuu