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Post by Swiftwish on Aug 27, 2011 14:28:52 GMT -6
BLOOD Blood is pain. Pain is what I feel inside. Blood isn't good. Thats what they always say. Blood is my therapy. I feel happy when I see it. Especially if its my blood.
Blood is red. Red is dark. Darkness is what I feel inside. Darkness is consitered morbid. And unhealthy. Take a look at me.
Blood is horrible. Blood is painful. Blood makes me cry. But at the same time..
Blood is the only thing. That keeps me alive.
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Post by perceus500 on Aug 27, 2011 14:48:05 GMT -6
Very good. *applauds* Nice picture at the top, by the way. Anyway, I only see one spelling error; considered. Other than that, it's bloody excellent, if you'll excuse the bad joke. 9.99 / 10
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