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Post by Destinedspirit on May 1, 2012 18:41:01 GMT -6
The way my mentor hurt me was brutual. He made fun of me when I messed up and beat me when I wasn't paying attention. Everyday I came back to camp with more bruises on my heart and body. No one seemed to care. It was like I was a ghost. Why was it my destiny to be beaten and almost killed? Why is my name Destinedpaw when I have no destiny worthy of being a warrior? Why was I put on this Earth to have no destiny, Starclan? I know every cat has a destiny to do something great in life, but I don't have that such thing. Maybe I was meant to die that night when my father saved me from that fox. He wasn't supposed to die, it was supposed to me. It is all my fault that he is dead. Iwill never forgive myself for this curse that has been put upon me. I stared up at the stars waiting for some sort of sign from Starclan.
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Post by Koisplash on May 1, 2012 19:27:16 GMT -6
Um...first off, I have two questions:
1) No Clan cat would beat up their apprentice like that. If they would, they'd be punished and probably exiled. Seriously, what did Destinedpaw even do to deserve it? Her Clan sounds like more like it's of wild rogues. It doesn't make any sense.
2) This takes place in IceClan. By this, do you mean the VWW IceClan, or some other Clan with the name "Ice"?
3) If she gets hurt so much, why doesn't she just go to the medicine cat? The medicine cat's supposed to heal everyone, and she's no exception. Or she could report her mentor to the leader.
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Post by Destinedspirit on May 1, 2012 19:38:17 GMT -6
1. This story is about this she-cat that thinks she is with the warrior clans but really isn't. The only one that really was, but was captured by these cats was her foster mother. So it isn't the warrior clans.
2. She is to shy and timid to go to the leader of these rogue cats because he is know to be really mean.
3. This isn't the VWW's Iceclan they only tell her this so she will stay, because she has a destiny she doesn't know about yet.
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