Ivyleaf
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Post by Ivyleaf on May 10, 2013 18:42:10 GMT -6
Ivypaw had just become a apprentice and she had really no idea what to do. Maybe Shadepaw could help.
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Post by Duskpaw on May 11, 2013 5:03:38 GMT -6
"Ivypaw, it's funny cause has your mentor been on lately? Mine hasn't. I got another friend! Redraw and Softpaw... Aww Softpaw." as I was saying her name I was dreaming of her. Then I snapped out of it. "Sorry Ivypaw. I went yoicks."
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Ivyleaf
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Post by Ivyleaf on May 11, 2013 6:23:50 GMT -6
Ivypaw purred. "Its okay. Whos your mentor? I got Greenflare."
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Post by Duskpaw on May 11, 2013 7:26:27 GMT -6
"Hailstorm. Do you want to go hunting? I sure do. I want to get out of here!" I ran to the entrance of the camp. "Come on!"
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Ivyleaf
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Post by Ivyleaf on May 11, 2013 7:27:17 GMT -6
Ivypaw followed him. " Okay" She called out.
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Post by Duskpaw on May 11, 2013 7:29:59 GMT -6
"I'm going to the FourTrees. Just to see what's out there." I ran outside of the camp and stopped.
( Let's make a new one in the clans teritory. Same name and it picks up of here. You make it.)
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Ivyleaf
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Post by Ivyleaf on May 11, 2013 7:34:51 GMT -6
OK I made it.
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Post by Waspwing on May 11, 2013 12:09:03 GMT -6
"Ivypaw, it's funny cause has your mentor been on lately? Mine hasn't. I got another friend! Redraw and Softpaw... Aww Softpaw." as I was saying her name I was dreaming of her. Then I snapped out of it. "Sorry Ivypaw. I went yoicks." Please don't say things like "So-and-so hasn't been on lately." or "Why hasn't So-and-so been online?" It makes it look like you're talking about the person, not the character, which is against the rules in RP. Say something like "Have you seen Hailstorm around recently? I haven't." At least then you note their absence, but you also keep it in character. |
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Post by Duskpaw on May 11, 2013 17:08:39 GMT -6
Sorry waspwing. What you want me to do?
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