six feet under.

[Obsidiansong]

Tonight purple dots become red.
Tonight, I meet the mosquito to
whom's bite I welcome,

encourage

even. Will I succumb to insanity
today? Tomorrow? Do I dare risk
My health, my life for

the

comforting metallic kiss? Of course
I do! Flip it open, reach for the pipe
full of garnet gold. Study the

crimson

flow, originating from an opened
vein. It disappears, and you walk
beside globins and ghouls, until
you're turn, uniting with the

waterfall

Convulse in the wake of a blue and red
panic, the corner of your mouth beginning
to slip downward, anger proceeding.
Offer your sweetest

smile

Don't let your journey be ruined as you
take a final plunge into the pool. The shrieking
monitors stop. It is

at

this moment that you're most at peace.
Captivating your blood-stained float,
your heart ablaze. Not with the usual hatred -
but with love. Love of

the

blade, that is. Finally, you sink into the choppy
water, green orbs forever extinguished. A face
achromatic with the beauty of death. Proceed to the

light

for The Wraith's final kiss as you pass into the magic
of Shangri La, forever enveloped in undying, undefinable
utopia - the only one you've ever known.

I know this is really pretty dark. But it's also deeply personal. I love comments and critiques, but please.. just, be mindful that some of the depicted scars still exist.

[Redfern]

-pet-

Still incredibly deep and pretty.
You have talent xD
Of course I already knew that though. Yay!

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[Obsidiansong]

Jul 17, 2013 1:29:51 GMT -6 Redfern said:

-pet-

Still incredibly deep and pretty.
You have talent xD
Of course I already knew that though. Yay!

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[Snowflare]

This poem sucks. c;

[Obsidiansong]

It's honestly not the best I've written. D;