Heartbreak:

Crystalclaw
CloudClan Spirit

Posts: 1,015

Heartbreak: Jul 27, 2013 10:21:25 GMT -6

Post by Crystalclaw on Jul 27, 2013 10:21:25 GMT -6

Lonely. Desperation. Broken. My heart bleeds and the tears have stopped yet the pain remains. The sun shines but yet my world remains black. Will I ever put the pieces back together?

This is a journey for only one because no one understands the dark night of a soul devoid of hope. To live, to die? Yet I choose life. Clawing, scraping, climbing. They say joy comes in the morning. When will my morning come? Today, tomorrow? A hundred tomorrow's from now? Press on. Press on and may the sweet oil of healing begin to renew my broken heart.

(This is just quick and short, but any opinion's?)

^credit to Kimi
Name: Crystalclaw
Friends: Tearpaw, Turtlepaw Spiderpaw Emberstorm, Snakeclaw
Former Mentor: Snakeclaw
Likes: Emberstorm
You said you could not stand seeing my heart broken...
But when you broke it,
did you close your eyes?

Talonfang Warrior in my next life, i want to be me, and meet you again Posts: 815	Heartbreak: Jul 28, 2013 20:02:30 GMT -6 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Talonfang on Jul 28, 2013 20:02:30 GMT -6 I think it is lovely, you are a great poet!

Shadowfrost Warrior My computer has an add virus<3 Posts: 268	Heartbreak: Dec 3, 2013 14:29:33 GMT -6 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Shadowfrost on Dec 3, 2013 14:29:33 GMT -6 I love it! You are an AMAZING poet!!!
	Anime teaches us that cute girls with pink hair are obsessive psychopaths Bio Theme Song

Crystalclaw CloudClan Spirit Posts: 1,015	Heartbreak: Dec 10, 2013 16:11:10 GMT -6 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Crystalclaw on Dec 10, 2013 16:11:10 GMT -6 Thanks so much guys it's a bit of a late response but I appreciate it
	^credit to Kimi Name: Crystalclaw Friends: Tearpaw, Turtlepaw Spiderpaw Emberstorm, Snakeclaw Former Mentor: Snakeclaw Likes: Emberstorm You said you could not stand seeing my heart broken... But when you broke it, did you close your eyes?

Dovefur Warrior 10% Posts: 193	Heartbreak: Dec 20, 2013 6:31:09 GMT -6 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Dovefur on Dec 20, 2013 6:31:09 GMT -6 Amazing poem it is awesome.
	_{Dovefur, I am The silver one over here. I happy, well usually! And if I'm not... Well you'll know when that's near. I'm better than you, Or anyone at that...At climbing… And being awesome, Or havin' an angry chat. Well bye bye for now, 'Cause I'm of to wonderland, With my best buddies and all.With beach water and sand. © to Lotuspetal for poem}

Crystalclaw CloudClan Spirit Posts: 1,015	Heartbreak: Dec 21, 2013 22:36:50 GMT -6 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Crystalclaw on Dec 21, 2013 22:36:50 GMT -6 Aww thanks so much
	^credit to Kimi Name: Crystalclaw Friends: Tearpaw, Turtlepaw Spiderpaw Emberstorm, Snakeclaw Former Mentor: Snakeclaw Likes: Emberstorm You said you could not stand seeing my heart broken... But when you broke it, did you close your eyes?

Post by Crystalclaw on Jul 27, 2013 10:21:25 GMT -6

Post by Talonfang on Jul 28, 2013 20:02:30 GMT -6

Post by Shadowfrost on Dec 3, 2013 14:29:33 GMT -6

Post by Crystalclaw on Dec 10, 2013 16:11:10 GMT -6

Post by Dovefur on Dec 20, 2013 6:31:09 GMT -6

Post by Crystalclaw on Dec 21, 2013 22:36:50 GMT -6