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Post by Deleted on Oct 1, 2013 5:07:05 GMT -6
Ripplekit padded into what smelt like the medicine cats den, after all there was a lot of herb smells coming from the den, but then it could just be where they stored their herbs. Hello, medicine cat, I think. I-I think there's something w-wr-wrong with me. P-please help m-me she stammered, her small kit voice quiet with fear. She padded farther into the den, her glazed amber eyes brimming with fear as she padded on. Suddenly she bumped into something. She leapt back in fear and scented the air. Phew! it was just a cat. M-medicine cat? C-can you please h-h-help me please she mewed, her voice even quieter as she looked sightlessly at her paws.
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Post by Forestbreak on Oct 1, 2013 19:29:15 GMT -6
Forestbreak blinked as the blubbering kit walked into the den, and stared at her wordlessly as she continued forward and bumped into her paw. The medicine cat knitted her brow and help up her paw, as if inspecting it, then put it back down. Strange kit.
"I can't help you if you don't tell me what's wrong," she finally said, glancing down at the young cat. "Are you sick? Did you hit your head?" she said hesitantly, leaning down to inspect her head. Perhaps that would explain why she seemed so confused. "By the way, call me Forestbreak. And what's your name?" she mewed politely.
(I really would not recommend making your character blind. There are many blind cats on VWW already, too many for it to be a realistic ratio. Also, it would be extremely unrealistic for your character to become a warrior if they were blind, and obviously they cannot be a medicine cat apprentice or something. It's ultimately your decision, but I strongly advise against it.)
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Post by Deleted on Oct 1, 2013 22:54:14 GMT -6
(Well, I wanted to try something new, so yeah. Sorry to disappoint...)
Ripplekit tilted her head at the sound of a voice. I'm not sure what's wrong, everything is so...Dark. Her voice was merely audible, a quiet whisper that was fueled by confusion. For some reason, ever since Mistyspark had told her the story of the lost digger, she had been oblivious to her surroundings. With a shake of her head she beamed in once more, just in time to hear the medicine cat introduce herself. My name is Ripplekit she whispered, her voice still quiet and confused. She glanced sightlessly around the den before looking back to the medicine cat, no, Forestbreak.
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