Story please?

[Venomkit]

Venomkit bounced into the elders den, a huge golden leaf in his jaws. The small smokey gray tom-kit fancied leaves quite a bit. Pricking his ears, Venom mewled, "Can someone tell me a story, please?" He sat down patiently and licked his tiny paw then swiped it quickly over his furry forehead. Venom's orange eyes widened as he could barely sit still now. Would the story be sad, funny, or both? He puffed out his chest so the elders would think this was really strong. He gave a toothy smile, trying to show off the small fangs.    

[Moonpool]

Moonpool opened his sleepy eyes in surprise, he had dozed off but was awoken by the squeaks of a kit. Twitching his nose, the elder yawns and extended his legs into a stretch. Moonpool then sat up and looked at Venomkit who had entered the den.

"A story was it you said?" Moonpool asked the kit who sat proudly, the tom could not help but smile in amusement. " Any type of story you had in mind?"

[Venomkit]

Yay! A elder heard him. The elder had a scarred pelt. Venomkit meowed in reply to the elder before dipping his head respectfully toward the elder, "Hmm, suprise me?" He saw amusement in the elder's forest green eyes and held back a small giggle. This was his first story ever! It's funny how he's only shy to other kits. "Oh, what's your name?" a squeak escaped Venom. His pelt fluffed up even more, he wanted to look like the warriors he always saw padding in and out of camp with lifeless prey dangling from their jaws. "One day, I'll be doing that, too."

[Moonpool]

Moonpool's whiskers twitched as he let out a small purr, this kit was very friendly and polite for his age. " Hmm I wonder what I should tell ya....."he drifted off before being snapped back to reality by the small kit asking another question.

"My name is Moonpool... young one, what do they call you?" He asked lowering his head to get closer to eye level with the kit. So many kits had been birthed recently Moonpool had not yet gotten to know them all by name though he tried his best to keep up.

[Venomkit]

Hearing Moonpool purr made Venomkit happy. Venom's eyes glowed with happiness as he answered Moonpool's question, "I am called Venomkit." Venom wondered what the life of a elder would be like. He knew that the elders have served their clan very well and deserved a break. All of them are deeply respected by the whole entire clan. When he would become an apprentice, he'd work extra hard to help out the elder. And, when Venomkit was a warrior, he'd always hunt for them. Delicious, plump prey would be waiting for them everyday when Venom was a warrior. "One day, I'll hunt for you everyday!" the orange eyed tom kit promised, gazing with shining sunset orange eyes.

[Moonpool]

"Well Venomkit,I am very glad you want to ....I hope you keep that promise as well does my stomach hope." He said with a grin before sitting down in a comfortable position . He beckoned Vemonkit to come sit near him with a flick of his tail and began to ponder his story choice once more.

"Well young Venomkit I think I might just have a good story for you if you do not mind a story from when I was about apprentice age... it is a story of the sorts...err... I would say a rescue mission describes it well." He explained slowly with a small nod.

" Would you like to hear it then?" He asked after a moment.

[Venomkit]

Venomkit strolled over to join Moonpool, excited to heard about the story. He saw the elder grin, he let out a small chuckle himself before he nodded with a smile. Venomkit was finally about to hear a thrilling story. He almost started bouncing off the walls. "I will keep my promise Moonpool, I will. the young tom was going to keep his promise too. No matter what, Venom vowed he'd never betray his clan. Hopefully that promise would last....forever. A mission? Wicked! This sounded like it was going to be pretty juicy. He waited silently for Moonpool to start his story.

[Moonpool]

Moonpool looked at the young kit eagerly waiting for the story. Before Moonpool could start the story , however, he had to explain a tad of background. " Alright before we start the story I got to explain some things, this was a long time ago ... when Beechstar was not leader and before I lived in Treeclan." He bluntly explained as he glanced at the cat with his green eyes.

"I did not always live in Treeclan mind you, and this story takes place when I lived with my brother Bone and his friends near twolegplace. My brother was not a kittypet but a few out our companions were.... are you familiar with what twolegs live in?" He asked realizing it would be important for the kit to know to understand the story.

[Venomkit]

His fire-like orange eyes widened, "Really? Woah!" he knew that kittypets lived in twoleg dens. "You've been...outside the TreeClan territory? Awesome!" Venomkit was barely aloud to go outside the nursery let alone outside the territory. He wondered if he'd ever leave.the territory. "Will I ever go beyond the clan territory?" Venom wandered out loud before shutting up to listen to what he's got to say.

[Ashfang]

"Trust me kid, you don't want to" Mewed Ashfang as she padded in with a vole and a squirrel in her jaws "Its a dangerous place past home. But for Moonpool here nothings dangerous" she muttered dropping the squirrel by the orange elder. "Oh sorry .. heh story time. You want some squirrel kid? Oh by the way I'm Ashfang. His mate." she said flicking the orange elders ear with her tail.

[Moonpool]

"Why of course, you could say I was a bit of a traveler when I was younger" He mewed with a toothy smile as he readjusted himself as he was growing uncomfortable. " I am sure you will, hopefully for good reasons though. I have been all the way up Iceclan's mountains and into their camp on multiple occasions as well as Rockclan and Fireclan...I have even snuck into Deathclan's camp once but those are all stories for a different day." He explained as he gave a cough to clear his throat. After a few coughs he redirected his eyes to Venomkit.


Moonpool glared as his mate pranced into a perfectly good story. "Now Ashfang we were in the middle of one of my favorite tales to tell, best adventure me and my brother had ever had and you are bring squirrel...the nerve" He mummbled rolling his eyes a tad. He waited for her to settle herself before continuing the story for Venomkit.


" Now to our story my boy, where were we at..... yes yes you know of the twoleg dens don't yeah... then we can continue." He muttered to himself as he tried to remember where they left off. "Now one day my brother and I were out and about the gardens with our friend Solar, Solarshine now. We were just making our way to a good spot to grab some food when one of our kittypet friends came bursting past us wailing rapidly! I say she was acting as if a dog bit her tail off she was rambling and cring out so much." He exclaimed as he rolled his eyes at the memory of his kittypet friends, always a tad to dramatic.

"Now my brother asks her whats the matter and once we get to understand what she was saying we learned out friend Mint had been captured by a twoleg and locked up! Now Mint wasn't exactly a housecat so she could not get out by mewing at the entrance of the dens. I can guess you might know what we were going to do next eh?"

[Venomkit]

Venomkit noticed a she-cat walk in a answer his question. "Hi!" he mewed, looking at Moonpool's mate, Ashfang. Venom absorbed the mouth-watering scent of squirrel. But, it was for the elder so he wouldn't eat any. "No, thanks. I'm not hungry." 'mini' smiled. He blinked. A leaf rolled into the den when a swift, refreshing breeze slipped by. Venomkit stuck out a small, but sharp claw and hooked the crunchy leaf and then jumped on it, as if it were a squirrel. "Got you!" Venom growled playfully to the 'squirrel'.