My Cousin's Story ~ The Lost Pegasus

[Petalfur]

So, my 7 year-old cousin wanted to write a story, so here it is! -Remember that it's not ME writing, I'm simply typing, and she is telling me what to say with a little Lot word choice help this should be good...

The Lost Pegasus

    A young white pegasus with light pink wings and pink hair walked through the forest with her mom with trees surrounding her. A big tower looked over her. Suddenly she lost track of her mom because she was looking at the tower, and then she called her mom but she didn't answer, so she kept walking and walking until suddenly she found a town. She saw lots of other pegasus' and horses. There was a market there, too. She thought she saw her mom but she didn't, so kept walking.
    Suddenly she found a pegasus her age. "Hi, my name is Sparkleworks," the lost pegasus said. "Will you be my friend?" So they walked, and walked, and walked. And then they found her mom, and they walked home, and the little pegasus' had a playdate.

The end

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You should see me with my XD face.

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It's very..... Cute. I love the name Sparkleworks. xD

[Petalfur]

Me too. I couldn't help giggling a little when she told me the name. I asked her what she wanted the name to be, and she said "Hm.. (-five minutes later-) Sparkleworks. Like Fireworks, but Sparkles!"

I just told her about the comments, and she laughed and looked very happy that you guys said something

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My sister is three years old and she(You know LPS? I have a whole box of those. She plays with them)makes up these CRazy stories even more weird than your cousin.

[Petalfur]

*Crazy Laugh* You should post one sometime They're fun to read and type

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Nah, I think I forgot them, but I still remember the feeling.

[Petalfur]

Ooh.. Children get older! LOL.