Post by Petalfur on Oct 5, 2014 20:04:28 GMT -6
I have guests over. Yes, I have a life, imagine that. Anyway, sitting around eating burritos can be boring, so I suggested to the eldest child of my company if he wanted to write a story. He agreed, and so like I did way back with my cousin, I'm going to type it out for him as he says it. Please, no harsh critiquing; he's only 7 and a half. Thanks guys!
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The Lost Sneakers
By *******
The Lost Sneakers
By *******
I am sitting at school. No ones looking at me. But I lost my sneakers! In the toilet! I know it sounds kinda funny, but it's true! And in two minutes, we are going to recess. How am I gonna walk around on the play-area when it's filled with wood-chips; it will hurt my feet.
(At recess)
I think I just felt something from the ground. I think its my shoe! No, someone just dropped a ball on me. Ow! "Now someone has to be careful with what they're throwin' and I mean it!" Do you see what I'm seeing in the sky? I think I see an army plane crashing. I think it's gonna hit the school! I'd better tell everyone to get out, 'cause that plane is drawing fire!
Do you think I should go to the front of the school, or the back? Maybe the back, and maybe the front, but I don't know, all I know is I want to get in the school before recess ends, because that planes gonna fall right on us. I better go right now.
(inside)
I think I might go into the bathroom. I'm getting kinda hot, and the bathroom's the best place to go 'cause it's always cool. And I just looked in the toilet, and I think I see my sneaker! Yep, it's mine! At least I'm cool now, not to mention, the two ways to say cool, and I'm still both of them!
(At recess)
I think I just felt something from the ground. I think its my shoe! No, someone just dropped a ball on me. Ow! "Now someone has to be careful with what they're throwin' and I mean it!" Do you see what I'm seeing in the sky? I think I see an army plane crashing. I think it's gonna hit the school! I'd better tell everyone to get out, 'cause that plane is drawing fire!
Do you think I should go to the front of the school, or the back? Maybe the back, and maybe the front, but I don't know, all I know is I want to get in the school before recess ends, because that planes gonna fall right on us. I better go right now.
(inside)
I think I might go into the bathroom. I'm getting kinda hot, and the bathroom's the best place to go 'cause it's always cool. And I just looked in the toilet, and I think I see my sneaker! Yep, it's mine! At least I'm cool now, not to mention, the two ways to say cool, and I'm still both of them!
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