ButterflyEffects (Warrior Cats) ||| ..: The Decision:.. |||

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Redpaw had to hold on. His life depended on it, Considering he was hanging from a high cliff. Maybe it wouldn't be that bad if I fell just a bit... He thought. He blinked again. "Concentrate.." He snapped out loud.  He looked around in panic. How... How did this happen!? He thought. His mind was whirling, His tail was thrashing, He grasped a paw-hole, But slipped, This time he sent bits of rock down the cliff. 


                     Hey.. I'm Redpaw. Maybe I should tell you how this all happened. It was my dumb mouse-brained decision. Maybe if I hadn't... Maybe if I made a better choice... Beetlepaw might not have died...


It all started when my apprentice's ceremony took place. Beetlepaw and I had decided to visit the borders of Lakeclan, (My roleplay clan) At the time, We didn't think that Crowstar would punish us. The dumb cat is too busy taking care of his clan, And not the patrols or borders. So, With that, We ran off towards the large cliff. We talked about how Silverstar died, By leading the dogs down here. it had been her last life.. And maybe her worst choice. The Butterfly effect got her too... Like Beetlepaw. Maybe ME at this point. Beetlepaw leaned up against a tree. I told him that he looked like a huge clumsy Dog. Beetlepaw had scowled, Making his ebony face scrunch up. I laughed. After awhile, I leaned over the edge of the cliff. Maybe it was my weight.. Beetlepaw had old me to stop wasting the small mice in the fresh-kill pile. The thin edge had toppled over, And I held on to a root. Beetlepaw tried to pull me up, But he couldn't. His only decision was to carefully climb down, And get us both up. As he climbed down, his paws slipped, And he had flown away, Like a dark leaf in the wind. I knew that it was the end.. My only friend had drifted away from me.. Like Mom... Like my father. And now.. I'm here.


Redpaw kicked his back legs up, Swinging himself so that he'd reach safety. His eyes were now dull with grief and his muddy fur clung to him like cobweb. Look at me, Beetlepaw. I can see you laughing... Calling me a dog too. He slowly padded back to the tree, Trying to groom himself. It was only a matter of time before a LakeClan patrol would catch him. Maybe not... He blinked, Trying to focus his vision. His dirt-filled claws clung to the earth. I should get back to camp. He thought.



                         HEY, Want more? Post a comment! Maybe even a storyline and characters!










   

[Asterheart]

I have a character...

Name: Blazepaw
Gender: She cat
Looks: Red point siamese amber eyes
Idea: How about she could somehow help him feel like he belongs again, help him lighten up I guess. Up to you.

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(Ahh yes, I can use past characters!)


Redpaw sprinted back to camp, His mud-plastered fur splattering dirt everywhere. "Help! HELP! Beetlepaw is DEAD!" He wailed. A pretty red-point Siamese she-cat came trotting up to him, Along with the medicine cat of his clan, -Leafclan-, Dappleleaf. "Who's dead? Redpaw, Please-" Dappleleaf stared at him. His muddy fur still clinging like a kit to it's mother. "Where did you go?" She asked softly. Redpaw looked up in dismay, His dim eyes were almost closed -Due to the mud in his face, He gave a small whimper- "B-Beetlepaw and I went to celebrate being apprentices, We slipped..." He choked, "... And B-Beetlepaw fell... Like.." He breathed heavily. "My mother and father..." Dappletail knew that the young tom dreaded speaking about his diseased parents. The red-point siamese nudged Redpaw sympathetically. "It's okay, I'm sure Beetlepaw was a great cat," She said softly, She paused. "I'm Blazepaw. I'm not really sure if you're comfortable with talking to me at this point, But hey, I'm here if you need me." She stepped back, Landing right next to her mentor, Dappletail. Redpaw stared, Not speaking a word. She's really pretty.. He thought wistfully. Dappletail took the grief/lovestruck apprentice to the medicine den. Blazepaw shook her head pathetically. "I'm a medicine cat!" She said to herself. But one glance to Redpaw, Told herself that she regretted it.

(I'm continuing, If you don't like my use of Blazepaw, I will remake this! I just want people to enjoy! ^^)

[Asterheart]

Nah, that was sorta what I meant anyways, sounds like it's gonna be great, can't wait for the next part!

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 Redpaw sat in the medicine den. He felt fidgety, But tried to remain calm as Dappletail fed him some herb. His tongue felt bitter, And he wanted to spat it out more that anything. Blazepaw quietly padded into the den, Ignoring the annoyed Redpaw, And squishing the juice out of stems. Redpaw squirmed more than ever. Redpaw grunted something under his breath, Then thought, Dappletail's doing her job... Keeping the clan healthy! Maybe I should've been a bit nicer.. He turned back to Dappletail. "You may leave. Oh, Blazepaw, Lakeclan has found a medicine cat apprentice. Her name is, Mistypaw, I believe. She broke her backbone, And can't walk right. Her mentor Willowgaze said that you may want to meet her," She told her apprentice. Redpaw scrunched his nose. Lakeclan is always so 'NICE'. Friends with every clan! Why can't our clan be friendlier? Then he thought of the other clans. There were so many of them! Redpaw blinked thoughtfully as Yellowstar padded gracefully over to him. "You'll be coming to the gathering, Along with a few warriors. I believe Fernclan, Summerclan, Winterclan, And Lilyclan won't be coming, Though." He informed the red tom. Redpaw's eyes lit up. Maybe I can meet some other clans! He thought excitedly.



(I'm tired, More will come tomorrow.)

[Speckflame]

Name: Icepaw
Gender: She cat
Looks: Silver-and-white patched fur with sky blue eyes.
Idea: Is apart of Redpaw's Clan and basically loves him to death. She hates any cat who tries to get close to him, and will follow him around just to make sure no one else will have him. Though she gets easily embarrassed and flustered, and has a very sharp tongue and mean spirit. Basically just a character for any use.


Like the story so far

[Petalfur]

Here's a thought?


Name: Sharpheart
Gender: Tom
Looks: large russet-colored cat with a fluffy tail and large green eyes

Idea: Redpaw's mentor? Perhaps he's extremely intimidating and always disapproving Redpaw? Yet unbeknowest to him, Sharpheart actually cares a ton about Redpaw, just doesn't know how to treat him without being stern.

Just an idea I like this idea of a reader-guided story. nice job, by the way!

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OMG! Thanks for all the stuff you guys! Okay, You're really helping me! Actually, I'm so excited that the story will continue now!

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                          "Can everyone just pretend that this is called 'Leafclan, A new clan arises'? Because I didn't realize that it would end up like this xD"




Redpaw's thoughts were soon stopped as his mentor, Sharpheart, Crept up behind him. "You were late for
training.." He said, Coolly. Redpaw gritted his teeth. (Okay, Why am I thinking of Snape from Harry Potter..?) Why did Sharpheart have to be my mentor! He cried in his head. "We're going to the gathering," he said, Trying to change the subject. Sharpheart looked ten times worse than he did when Redpaw had been thinking. "Y-Yellowstar told me," Redpaw continued, Swallowing the fear-ridden lump in his throat. Sharpheart kicked his back paws and then with a SWISH, He was gone. (Also, Why does Icepaw's description remind me of Yandere-Chan?) 
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Blazepaw trotted out of the den, carrying mashed-plants covered in leafs. She sighed wistfully. There are some things I regret in being a medicine cat...  She thought. Blazepaw looked around, And BAM, A silvery shape hit her side.

[Speckflame]

Literally I was going to put 'she's a Yandere' in that too, but I didn't know if anyone knew what that was. xD but yes, Icepaw is a Yandere.

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~Ahaha! Awesome, Now I know I'm not the only person who loves Japanese-Stuff.~


Blazepaw almost FLEW, As the silvery figure's blow had hit her. She let out a little cry of surprise, before getting back up. Icepaw was standing in front of her, A gruesome look on her face. "Icepaw, Why did you d that?" Blazepaw complained. She looked down at the herbs, "You ruined it!" She squeaked. Icepaw blinked. "Stay away from Redpaw..." She warned the medicine cat. Blazepaw tilted her head. "What..?" She asked curiously. Icepaw growled, Then ran off. "....That was... Strange.." She commented. 

[Asterheart]

Aww, poor little blaze, her first flying lesson didn't go so well eh? Maybe next time...
Loving your story so far!

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Thank you! You can also make new characters. I don't mind, You can make a million if you'd like!


Thanks Asterheart

[Asterheart]

Oh, yay! Seems Blaze is a med kitty, I got an idea!

Let's say for some reason the main med kitty can't work for a while for some reason(she blew up! Lol), so Blaze is left in charge, and Red gets asked to assist her in healing a certain cat. I don't know, maybe....Stormfeather??? Anyways, this'll give dem bonding time. And maybe ice might try and sabotage them or something, maybe try and get Blaze fired from med?

Sorry, my mind exploded, I'm a plotter, love making characters lives hard. XD

[Petalfur]

Name: Sparkpaw
Gender: Male
Looks: Orange tabby with lighting-like stripes and bright yellow eyes
Idea: Maybe this guy can sympathize for Redpaw and replace Beetlepaw. This could cause inner conflict in Redpaw because he's worried he'll end up hurting Sparkpaw, and Spark can show him through that fear ♥

And if you need anyone else

Name: Nightpaw
Gender: Female
Looks: Black with blue eyes
Idea: Another she-cat to mess with Redpaw's head. HA three cats drooling over him. So Night can be all mysterious and incredibly attractive (*snicker*) but also really sharp-tongued and intelligent, so she'd be the ideal mate, except that she's all tough and not terribly compassionate.This could leave him in a split between Blazepaw and Nightpaw and be forced to choose in the future >=D


BTW, would you mind if I borrowed the readers-make-the-story kind of idea for a subject of my own? Of course I'd give you credit and it wouldn't be about warriors, because that would be too much copying, but just the idea of the readers throwing out ideas? I love the idea! It's okay if not, I just wanted your permission ♥♥