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Swanfrost
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Firepaw opened her eyes. 'Ah... what a good nights sleep.' she thought. She got up on her paws and stretched her way out of the apprentices den. Firepaw was nine moons old. She was almost ready to become a warrior. She padded up to the fresh-kill pile. She was about to take a rabbit, when someone SNATCHED it from her, making her fall. "Hey! What was that for?" Firepaw yelled furiously at the apprentice that stole it, "I grabbed the rabbit first!"

[Swanfrost]

(Sorry, I have been really busy lately)
Swanpaw moved towards the fresh kill pile, yawning loudly. Being an apprentice was tiring, and she was starving. She glanced at the fresh kill pile, noticing how her favourite prey piece, a mouse, was not there. She hissed, going for the next best thing at the same time another apprentice did. She jerked it away from them, watching them tumbled to the ground. "Oh? I didn't realize Oceanstar had specifically said that this rabbit was for you. My apologies." She dipped her head mockingly, her words muffled by the prey.

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(Oh yeah it's okay!)
Firepaw's claws unsheathed, teeth bared. " Well I don't remember Oceanstar telling me that." she growled, "Finders, keepers. So give my rabbit back!" Firepaw crouched, building power in her hind legs. She leaped towards the white apprentice, attempting to pin her down.

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Swanpaw wasn't amused. "It's not your rabbit." She scowled, rolling her eyes. She blinked in annoyance as Firepaw crouched down, huffing. She opened her mouth to say something when the ginger apprentice lunged, squeaking in surprise. She swiftly moved to the side, just enough to avoid her, before locking her front paws around the others neck. She attempted to smash her into the ground, hissing. "Fox heart!"

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Firepaw was surprised when the white apprentice lunged at her, sending Firepaw to the ground. She clawed and pushed the cat off with her hind legs. "Well we don't know who we are, so why don't we start with names?" Firepaw growled, shaking her pelt, "I'm Firepaw."

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Swanpaw landed gracefully on her paws as the apprentice shoved her off, seething in annoyance. "And I don't care." She snarled, shaking out her fur. She recognized the name, and now that she thought about it the cat did seem familiar.

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Firepaw panted, huffed. "Well if you're not going to play nice, then..." she paused and glared at her with glowing amber eyes, grinning and licking her claws, "I guess you'll have to see the real me!" Firepaw leaped behind her and attempted to pin the apprentice to the ground. She finally remembered who she was battling with. 'Swanpaw?!'

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Swanpaw rolled her eyes at the felines dramatics. "Oh cry me a river, you're the one not playing 'nice' here." She hissed, digging her claws into the ground. Swanpaw was quick enough to turn around as Firepaw went behind her, taking a few cautionary steps back. Once she attempted to pin her Swanpaw let her, falling onto her back with the other apprentice ontop of her. In this position the other feline couldn't do much, but Swanpaw had access to her stomach. She kicked it repeatedly with her sharp back claws, gripping onto her head so she couldn't leave.

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Firepaw screeched, when Swanpaw held her head. She bit Swanpaw's arm to escape. "Oh, it's you... Swanpaw, isn't it?" she growled, "Nice to see you again." She stopped fighting and ran towards the rabbit and put it in her jaws and padded towards the apprentices den.

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Swanpaw hissed out a curse as Firepaw bit her arm, drawing it away from the apprentice. She scrambled to her paws as Firepaw escaped, tail lashing. "I wish I could say the same." She growled, eyes narrowed into slits. As Firepaw scooped the rabbit up Swanpaw snarled, moving towards her. She bit down on her tail, hard, and jerked her backwards.

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Firepaw felt her tail jerked. She filled with anger. "Let's just call us enemies and let this scene be done!" she growled, attempting to bite her face and claw her eyes.

(Sorry my reply is short, school is more important than a cat site... Anyways, just letting you know, you are power playing. You need to give the other role player a chance to dodge the attack, not controlling the character. Here is more information about that topic. virtualwarriorworld.proboards.com/thread/20960/roleplay-tips-more But I love your character! She has a unique personality!)

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(Hmm, sorry about that, I've been really sick lately and not really focusing on what I type. Oh, and I've already read that. Also, just a friendly tip with your fighting posts, when you say an attack it would be helpful to put it in more detail. Its hard to right a defense post when all I get is "Attempting to bite her face and claw her eyes." Not to mention its fairly difficult to do both of those things at the same time. Another thing to remember is your cats stomach is injured, so I'm sure Firepaw would be feeling some pain right now.)

Swanpaw took a step back as the apprentice turned on her. She managed to dodge the bite to the face, though Firepaws claws managed to slash across her muzzle. Wincing, her claws dug angrily into the soil as small drops of blood trickled to the ground. Swanpaw hissed in anger, turning around and stalking away without another word..


-End of thread unless you want to post one last time-

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Firepaw hissed and grabbed her rabbit and went towards the apprentices den. She winced as her stomach was scratched, injured. 'I hate her! She has no purpose to live!' she thought angrily. She entered into the apprentices den. She started to feel nauseous. 'I don't feel good...' she thought, her eye sight getting blurry and darker. She fell down to the ground and fainted.

((Oh yeah... sorry about that! And I hope you get well soon from your sickness! We can end the thread like this. Whew! That was some role play! I loved role playing with you!))